Thank you AG. Ohnie will see you and my dream lover never see myself through this poem.
She : Once upon a time I loved you
He: that time, I loved you more and still.
She: You didn't love me.
He: You were so silly not to realize my love.
She: I was blind with love
He: you were really blind not to see my return love.
She: You didn't see my eyes.
He: I didn't see anything but your eyes.
She: I had a 5 years journey
He: I still remember how wonderful that time was :)
She: I met you twice every year
He: I was counting the seconds and moments for our meeting.
She: Now.... you are silent like a rock.
He: your love makes me hurtfully speechless.
She: I am finding you..... why do you refuse me ???
He: You still do not realize that I refuse to enjoy the life without you but not you..
She: If you say a reason it will be easy me to make prepare my wedding ring.
He: Again I am speechless of your love.
She: You have a silent heart.
He: Yes, I do.. And it's full of you..
She: It hurts me a lot.
He: it hurts me more if you know.
She: A love of a poor girl.
He: it's my best honor in life.
She: You never see till you like me.
He: you don't know that It's all what I see.
She: If you don't love me.
He: Look into my eyes and you will see my love..
She: Why you can't tell it direct?
He: Coz, I want you to look into my eyes and see it.
She:If you hate me.
He: I hate my life when you are far away.
She: Why don't you tell it loud.
He: OK.. I HATE ME LIFE WHEN YOU ARE FAR AWAY.
She: Silent is not an answer..........
He: What can I do to make you hear me.
She: Love is waiting till I die.
He: Love is waiting till I die.
She: shining ring is waiting there.
He: There is no ring like my heart shining there into your finger.
She: I will marry him bcz of you.
He: I will love you till I die.
She: YOU stay my heart and hurt me ......
He: I don't wanna see you hurt again..
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Hi Hi again....
But Wait a second.... I don't know what you meant by this "Ohnie will see you and my dream lover never see myself through this poem."
I don't know what's in your mind, but it seems you misunderstood my intention that time....
I repeat again.... I said I published a blog, and Ohnie replied it the same way I replied your poem.. So That time it was like a game which I played it forward with your poem as Ohnie did with mine... Hope it's clear -_-
Vanakkam Shey! They often say that waiting is boring. Being in your nerves expecting something that may never happen. Hurting someone through someone else is destruction for all the parties. I like your lines. Thanks for sharing.
so nice..
just too touchy and so good!
I guess I have seen already something like that ))) Nice piece of writing ))
Thanks for sharing ))