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hidden and forbidden

Posted by Rosemie on July 11, 2010

A searching hearta wandering soulfound a friend in youevery words you saidstruck to my heartengraved your name on itcloser we becameI have fallen for youlove is fair , life is unfairwe belong to anothernot meant for each otherand couldn't be togethertears I cried, pain I bearan illicit relation I feelI would rather be blindto keep you in my mindthere you could be mineand our love be bindsacrifices be madecircumstances be facedconsequences be acceptedsecrets untoldfeelings unfoldcommitment unsettledsituations withhold

love, feelings, forbidden, hidden, relationships

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Rosemie August 15, 2010 9:55

thank you Manuela.
Forget-me-Not August 13, 2010 8:16

Hello Rosemie,
Thanks for this very touching poem. It goes right in the heart....
Manuela
Rosemie July 18, 2010 10:22

Hello everyone, thank you for your appreciation..
Alexandra July 16, 2010 19:47

It is very good poem. Thank you for sharing
Nadira July 13, 2010 4:41

one of the best poems of feelings yet to come.

soul searching, words true to life

wishing you all the very best ,for more. thankyou for sharing it with us.

regards
nadira
Lynne July 13, 2010 3:47

That's really nice. You're a poet Rosemie
Thanks for sharing that with us.
Good day!
-Lynne-
Rosemie July 12, 2010 14:53

Thanks a lot ,Rain..
Rosemie July 12, 2010 14:52

Thanks Kedar, I am hoping that any person going through this dilemma will not be judged otherwise.
KK July 12, 2010 7:49

Hi Rose, its one of the fabulous poem i read in my life first time, i read it thrice, i don't have any word to write here. Rose, i really spellbound.....................i can't get any word to write you.............just ...............keep it up!!!!!!!!!