It was her dream to see herself as a successful programmer in one of the best and famous company of her time. Her hard work took her on the rank she always dreamed about
After graduating from an average university, she got chosen as a programmer in her dream company. It was unbelievable for her. Ultimately, she believed and worked very professionally among the highly qualified colleagues.
Years passed, she earned experience and respect, made few but great friends, collected wonderful memories of her achievements and primarily she met her life partner. It was like, her dream changed her life. A high-flyer, she never fantasies to collide with. Although, it happened. She got married and led a happy life.
She was delighted, so many of her untold wishes got listened.
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That's right. You need to change "company" to "companies". After "one of the..." you always need to use a plural noun rather than a singular noun. Also, it would sound better if you wrote "one of the best and most famous companies of her time."
Yes, Tara I wrote it for the challenge but then decided to share it as an individual blog. :)
One of the best and famous companies of her time. Is it correct now?
may her dream always be strong..!! nice
thanks
Is this for the writing challenge? It sounds like a page from a biography!
Re corrections: Can you fix this common error?
"one of the best and famous company of her time"
Thanks :D Strangii!
if so, then cheers for her dreams:
Ann dear, no doubt, it was only her hard work and struggle which led her to an imaginary life. :D
Yea Komala dear! :) Thanks for stopping by.
JP_TP, thanks for the wishes, although it's imaginary. :D
Eva dear, hahha :D yea I am perfectly alright. :D
Yep it's a fictional blog. :D
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