HELP me find a title.....

I met someone before and had a hard time catching her. ( I mean gaining her friendship)  After a lot of patience and endurance, I was able to gain her attention.  Now, we are friends and everything is going smoothly.  I want her to know how much she means to me but my tongue is always withdrawn.  So, I decided to write a simple poem to express myself. 

I don’t know what title  will I give to this poem.  Hope the members will help me find the right title for it.

 

Before, you were a distant star to behold

Now, you are a necklace I can hold

 

Before, you were just a silhouette to my sight

Now, your form is very clear to my eyes

 

Before, touching you was just a dream

Now, holding your hand is like a gem

 

I should be thankful to before

For intensifying my feelings more

 

Now, anticipating has become expected

I can say …. I am greatly affected.

 

Thank you for reading it.  

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  • " A distant star" would be my suggestion. Nice poem, anyway.

  • Thanks a lot guys... Your titles are all fitting and good.  It only made it hard for me to select, lol!

  • "A moon's captured dream"
  • interesting and nice poem.. keep writing...

    Title "Dream to Reality"

  • Very impressive.
    Think about these titles:
    "The Reality"
    "Blossom"
    "My Bosom Friend"

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