I met someone before and had a hard time catching her. ( I mean gaining her friendship) After a lot of patience and endurance, I was able to gain her attention. Now, we are friends and everything is going smoothly. I want her to know how much she means to me but my tongue is always withdrawn. So, I decided to write a simple poem to express myself.
I don’t know what title will I give to this poem. Hope the members will help me find the right title for it.
Before, you were a distant star to behold
Now, you are a necklace I can hold
Before, you were just a silhouette to my sight
Now, your form is very clear to my eyes
Before, touching you was just a dream
Now, holding your hand is like a gem
I should be thankful to before
For intensifying my feelings more
Now, anticipating has become expected
I can say …. I am greatly affected.
Thank you for reading it.
Comments
" A distant star" would be my suggestion. Nice poem, anyway.
Thanks a lot guys... Your titles are all fitting and good. It only made it hard for me to select, lol!
interesting and nice poem.. keep writing...
Title "Dream to Reality"
Very impressive.
Think about these titles:
"The Reality"
"Blossom"
"My Bosom Friend"