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heart broking

Posted by Nadoucha (Little Angel) on November 19, 2014

she loves hem but she can't tell, he loved her and he tell her every single day, she is afraid from loosing hem, she keep that feeling in her heart,it's so painfull but she can't tell, she saw hem with another girl and she know that he wasn't happy just with her and also she... she keep hide this feeling and she is so tired, she feel like locked in the middle, she can't be with hem but she wich so and she can't see hem with another girl

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bet November 20, 2014 3:35

Observation: she keeps/hides her feelings. ( say feelings when you describe your mental state/emotion).
noaslpls November 20, 2014 0:45

That's must be heartbreaking for the girl. :(

Observation:-

Please use 'full stop or period' in between sentences, and not 'comma'. You may have a look at the 'punctuation' article in EC for further information.

Punctuation | Writing | EnglishClub

Punctuation is the system of symbols that we use to separate written sentences and parts of sentences, and to make their meaning clear. Each symbol i…
student9 November 19, 2014 21:53

thank for your subject
but you have some mistakes :

(him) not hem
(losing him) not loosing hem
(wish) not wich

I hope that is set .
good luck