O King! we were an ignorant people.
We neither knew Allah (Almighty God) nor his Messenger (Prophets).
We worshiped stones.We used to eat carrion and commit all sorts of undesirable and disgraceful acts.The strong among us wood thrive at the expense of the weak.Till at last, Allah raised a Messenger Muhammed (Sallallaho alaihe wasallam) for our reformation.His noble descent, up-right conduct, integrity of purpose,and pure life are only too well known among us.
He called upon us to worship Allah, and exhorted us to give up idolatry & stone worship.
He enjoined upon us right conduct.& forbade us from indecency.
He taught us to tell the truth, to make good our Trust, to have regard for our kith & kin,and to do good to our neighbors.
From him we learnt to observe Salaat (5 time Prayer ) , Fasting,Zakat,and good conduct: and to shun everything foul,and to avoid bloodshed.
He Forbade
Adultery , lewdness telling of lies, misappropriating the orphans heritage, bringing false accusations against others, and all other indecent of that sort.
He taught us the Quran, the wonderful book of Allah.so we believed in him, followed him and acted up to his teachings.
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Thanks Chandra , Next time I will try my level best
Hey, U shaikh. Do you want us to correct your mistakes? Okay, I'll do it.
First, you should have written an orientation in the beginning of the story. It contains where and when the conversation took place and the people involved. For example, you could have written:
On day, in Abyssinia palace, a conversation happened between the king and Hazrat Jafar, a decendant of the prophet Muhammad.
Second, you should have write the conversation in direct speech. You know what direct speech is, don't u? You should have put the sentences between two quotation marks. You didn't need to use colors. Well, you could but that's not as important as the quotations mark I've explained. And you shouldn't use different color if the words came from the same person.
But, by the way, I don't see the kings words. Where are they? Oh, it's a speech, not a conversation. :D Never mind. But I hope you know my point. Good luck!
Good topic, U shaikh, Jazakallah Khair !
Now let me support Hafida's opinion: with a little introduction as well as conclusion part, written by you, this topic would be perfect... :)
Keen learner do u have book Fazail e Ammal
Hi Anele My religion is Islam. Alhamdulillah (All praise belong to Allah ) I am Muslim , My real Name is Muhammed Umar .
It is story of first Hijrat of habsa. Najashi rahim dil badsha tha. Macca k non muslim ko jab path chala k musalman wha per khus hai. to macca ki taraf say eak wafad badsha k khidmat me hazir hua our musalmanoo ki bure ke. our un ko mecca behjaney per israr kya. Badsha accha admi tha usnai kha k me musalmnoo ko bula kar conform kar lo k u r right or wrong then king invite Muslim group that time he asked question regarding Islam then Hazrat Ali brother Hazart Jafar given this superb & heart touching speech then makka k wafad ko wapas hona pada ma u si k saath after some time knig accept Islam. I like this speach very much In short he explain Islam
thanks keen learner I will remember this thing
look when I said conjunctions I meant to look for your punctuation marks too because it help to justify the meaning and what you mean exactly in your talking ..In addition you can find here more information about that and know more about it ...Have a good improvement.
Can you give me detail regarding conjunctions I will practice
You write wonderful subject about our great teacher Muhammad -peace be upon him-and his great deeds . For my point of view ,I think your beginning wasn't so clear about un believers and who is saying firstly but the others are good but you have to avoid some several small mistakes like using & instead using and and after the full stop you have to care for using the capital letters always in addition to make good revision for conjunctions between sentences ..Good subject and I like it.
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