Hello,
I am writing about Confidence and Over-Confidence.
In simple words confidence is I can do it and over-confidence is I only can do it. Everyone in world move from confidence to over-confidence path and end his/her life. Once in our city a person deals in marble's and he was very confident that he can handle it properly , he did great job in that business but with times goes on he became best dealer in our area but the problem occur that he started thinking that i only can do it this business no other can do it so he started his monopoly, and started dis respecting others it worked for him for few years, but bad time never say when it comes his confidence that was his power became reason of ending and now he don't have anything.
Guys my motive of writing this blog is just tell you don't overestimate yourself and never underestimate other.
this is my first blog, I know I did a lot of mistakes please help me in finding them, specially where to use punctuation marks i don't know really.
Comments
Hi, good start.
As for the mistakes, please include the "corrections" tag in your blog. This way, teachers, native speakers, advanced learners and anyone who can be helpful, can come to see your blog and try to help you with the mistakes. So do not miss the tag "corrections" whenever you want to get the correction tips on your blogs.
Anyway, I really liked the simple way you described the two concepts. It's too bad to underestimate other people's abilities and be an egotist.
Thanks for the good topic.
Have a nice time.
:)
PS-
See this link to learn more about the punctuations.
thanks for you motivation sparrow
thanx noaslpls and nida, please suggest better way of writing this experience.
Aditya raj. Congrats on your first blog. Welcome to the world of blogger.
Really nice!
Congratulations on writing your first blog, Aditya raj!
Thanx Anizaq and Pakiza
Yes, Seeker you are good in it