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Hello,

I am writing about Confidence and Over-Confidence.

In simple words confidence is I can do it and over-confidence is I only can do it. Everyone in world move from confidence to over-confidence path and end his/her life. Once in our city a person deals in marble's and he was very confident that he can handle it properly , he did great job in that business but with times goes on he became best dealer in our area but the problem occur that he started thinking that i only can do it this business no other can do it so he started his monopoly, and started dis respecting others it worked for him for few years, but bad time never say when it comes his confidence that was his power became reason of ending and now he don't have anything.

Guys my motive of writing this blog is just tell you don't overestimate yourself and never underestimate other.

this is my first blog, I know I did a lot of mistakes please help me in finding them, specially where to use punctuation marks i don't know really.

I'm going to write about self confidence and over confidence.
In simple words self confidence means: when somebody trusts in himself/herself about everything which he/she wants to do and this feeling has a major role in our lives.

Over confidence means when somebody trusts in himself/herself about everything which he/she wants to do and he/she is so sure that just himself/herself can handle it! and this is the difference between self confidence and over confidence.

Turning out self confidence to over confidence means to get an arrogant personality!

For instance, i knew someone who was a marble dealer in my city. He trusted in himself and because of that he fulfilled his job perfectly. By times passed by, he became the best marble dealer in my city but he became a selfish person! and all the time he disregarded and disrespected others and because of that, people had tried to kept themselves away of him and he became a lonely person with all of people around him who didn't care about such an imperious dealer!

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Comments

Zahra July 20, 2013 23:16

Hi, good start.

As for the mistakes, please include the "corrections" tag in your blog. This way, teachers, native speakers, advanced learners and anyone who can be helpful, can come to see your blog and try to help you with the mistakes. So do not miss the tag "corrections" whenever you want to get the correction tips on your blogs.

Anyway, I really liked the simple way you described the two concepts. It's too bad to underestimate other people's abilities and be an egotist.

Thanks for the good topic.

Have a nice time.

:)

PS-

See this link to learn more about the punctuations.
Fahime March 21, 2013 11:13

I'm going to write about self confidence and over confidence.
In simple words self confidence means: when somebody trusts in himself/herself about everything which he/she wants to do and this feeling has a major role in our lives.

Over confidence means when somebody trusts in himself/herself about everything which he/she wants to do and he/she is so sure that just himself/herself can handle it! and this is the difference between self confidence and over confidence.

Turning out self confidence to over confidence means to get an arrogant personality!

For instance, i knew someone who was a marble dealer in my city. He trusted in himself and because of that he fulfilled his job perfectly. By times passed by, he became the best marble dealer in my city but he became a selfish person! and all the time he disregarded and disrespected others and because of that, people had tried to kept themselves away of him and he became a lonely person with all of people around him who didn't care about such an imperious dealer!
Fahime March 21, 2013 11:12

Hi Aditya

I have written a text with ur topic! I made some corrections...

Hope it will be hopeful...
Fahime March 20, 2013 21:43

Hi Aditya

Sorry, these days i was so busy (cuz we were getting ready 4 Persian new year)and now i've come online...

Ur topic is good but i should say it has some grammatical errors, and i wanna make them right...

Do u want 2 write the correct one here? send it as a message? or send it 2 ur email? pls choose one of this and then i'll make them right and send it 2 u as soon as possible...
Aditya raj March 20, 2013 9:58

thanks for you motivation sparrow
Aditya raj March 19, 2013 16:59

thanx noaslpls and nida, please suggest better way of writing this experience.
noaslpls March 19, 2013 14:34

Aditya raj. Congrats on your first blog. Welcome to the world of blogger.
nida March 19, 2013 13:30

Really nice!

Congratulations on writing your first blog, Aditya raj!
Aditya raj March 19, 2013 13:10

Thanx Anizaq and Pakiza
Aditya raj March 19, 2013 13:08

Yes, Seeker you are good in it

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