Flooding tears took my heart
Passages of thorns are hard to cross
Airports of goodbye stirred white
Your sky is singing and the areas of sorrow
in our eyes exploded to take
the rest of that feeling
We sang for you and we will sing.
The flooding tears covered the world
The return of love became a wish
In the coming season, visions will clash
We often blame the presence and
We do not regret the past
Your love was put inside and
The day committed suicide
We sang for you and we will sing
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Hello Mr. Dara,
I will see and I let you know about that.
Feel free to contact me on SKYPE ID: flaviomelofranca
Thank you so much.
Flavio
De nada Flavio De Melo Franca. I really hope to be one of your friends here. Thanks for your nice words.
Asante sana Salma Ibrahim! They are indeed very strong. I am doing fine, thanks for your concern. Please, extend my greetings to your family and friends. Thanks again, my respected teacher.
I can feel strong emotions flowing out of this. Nice piece though! I hope you and your family are doing fine? Have a great weekend!
Bahut bahut shukriya Sharoon Sunny. Thanks for pressing the like button.
Salamat Mayumi! Thanks for pressing the like button. Could you visit my page again and see The Wedding and give us your point of view? Thanks again.
Vanakkam Sunshine! As the matter of fact, there were many encouraging comments from many friends. That push me to write more poems. Thanks, Sunshine.
Maraming salamat Earlyseven Newtown! Thanks for your encouraging words. I really appreciate them. I also hope to be one of your friends. Can I be one of your friends? Thanks again for your comment on Flooding Tears.
This is awesome. I could feel the outflow of raw emotions.
Great work dara!
Superb poem sir... thanks for sharing