Flooding tears took my heart
Passages of thorns are hard to cross
Airports of goodbye stirred white
Your sky is singing and the areas of sorrow
in our eyes exploded to take
the rest of that feeling
We sang for you and we will sing.
The flooding tears covered the world
The return of love became a wish
In the coming season, visions will clash
We often blame the presence and
We do not regret the past
Your love was put inside and
The day committed suicide
We sang for you and we will sing
Comments
Vanakkam Sunshine! It really touches the heart. I am glad that you are pleased with it. Thanks, Sunshine for your nice comment.
Merasakan ketidakbahagiaan mod. Onee Chan. It is full of unhappiness, my dear good friend. The flooding tears filled the whole world. We have a saying, (Away from the eye, away from the heart). It means that if your loved one is away from you, his love or her love will lessen little by little.
The distance between those two lovers is so wide and far away, mod. Onee. You can use your own perspective to explain those flooding tears. I really wanted the reader to do that. Thanks, Onee for your nice comment.
Kiya haal hain Mishaikh sahib? Main kiya bola? More tears were covering that face and the sorrow is deep. The heart, of course, will become hard. Thanks for your first comment on those flooding tears.
A mourning for what is gone that won't be compensated anymore. That's what I feel now after reading your poem. Thanks
very very regrettable strings.
hardly hold back a tear.
Spasebo Winnie The Pooh! Thanks for your delicate feelings. Sorry for the late reply.
twas deep and touched my heart, smth behind the message that torn me apart, it is very relatable thank u for this poem Mr. Dara !
Actually, I couldn’t understand that what the reason for your tears is.
One of your beloved ones, was leaving from you, to distance over the ocean?
If so, let the time. “Time heals all wounds”.
And do sing along. All the songs will come as wishes and they will help to heal your sorrows as you wish.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, sir, Dara.
thanks for sharing dara, i'm not sure if i understand everithing, but it is nice to read some poetry.
This poem is really heart touching.. i am very pleased with this... thanks for the sharing dara sir...
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