When fire starts burning,
Wind intensify it.
Fire burns the wind and create water,
Water flows and understand the healing,
and always remains peaceful.
Fire ignites and lighten the earth,
with his fiery spirit.
Fire burns the earth and water fertile it.
Wind breezes and gives life,
At the end when fire starts dying,
Earth consume it inside and never let it die.
It's a pain and trauma of both.
Fire is lightest and has no weight.
Fire cannot be corrupted because it is pure.
Fire is the energy and always lives inside.
Fire is the beginner and Earth complete the cycle.
No one is greater, but everything is nature.
Yes, this is nature and we are elements.
We are together thats how nature creates balance.
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Oh how did I miss such a good poem? It's wonderful Sandeep and meaningful. It seems like you're a good poet. Thanks for sharing Sandeep :)
what a genius image and a great metaphor .... Yes dear ,I like poetry so much ....no words can be more deep and meaningful than the words written with imagination by poet's heart.
Thank you so much :)
@Hala
I read this beautiful lines of Christina Rosseti,
Come to me in the silence of the night;
Come in the speaking silence of a dream;
Come with soft rounded cheeks and eyes as bright
As sunlight on a stream;
Come back in tears,
O memory, hope, love of finished years.
Thanks you so much Hala, I didn't knew that you like poetry this much, this is so wonderful to hear from you. :)
Neither I nor you can see the wind by our eyes ....the beauty of nature can be seen by heart and soul ,it can be touched through the singing of the birds .....the breeze of the wind ....the joyful harmony of the trees and the flowers ...
There's music in the stillness of the hills,
the singing winds flow sofetly through the trees,
my listening soul respondes with silent song,
my singing heart responds in joyous tune
a song to life and love .
Thank you Sandeep ...by mentioning these magnificent lines by Christina Rositti ,you make me remember many words and lines about the beauty of nature .
parallel universes .... I love this theme ... gonna check it later ... not in the mood
Hehe! One who is already burned by the fire, cannot burned again.. Actually it makes him more fiery spiritual. ^.^
@Ulti
Lightening is not a single element as I feel - It is a mixture of Fire and Wind when cloud clashes in sky. That's why I would say it's not a primary element. May be some other time other elements guided by the nature.
Right now my search is for other nature elements which we didn't discovered yet, what do you think of parallel universe? That's only a thought if there are other nature elements existed? =)
@Hala
Thank you so much, Very remarkable thought of you - Let Nature be your teacher.
This poem of my childhood always nourishes my mind to learn from nature, to sharing with you makes me feel talking to nature. Tell me how do you feel?
so it doesn't fit your Fire theory here ? ah ????
@Keira
It's my original scientific mind poem... ^.^
Thank you so much!
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