My eyes light up
I grin
Would like to wait hundred times
just to hear your voice
in a long distance phone call
Love to search your face
in a crowd
Want to see you are staring at me
consciously and unconsciously
When I am in love with you
And, I let myself
cherish the good time
do the same thing
because, I know, deep down
there is still reminiscence of love
When I do not love you!
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WOW ! That's great . I love this one "" Want to see you are staring at me consciously and unconsciously"" very nice ! Thumbs up !
Danny, I have fixed it, thanks.
Thanks a lot, dear Shoba.
Very nice work, dear Afro.
Take your time and enjoy your life!
Very sincere, dear! Thanks for sharing!
I understood you were trying to write some lines, no worries! But, really don't you write poems?
I was just trying to continue your poem-writing:)
I don't really know how to write a poem - I wish I knew the ropes, though!
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