Once upon a time there was a little girl in a hill-side small village. In every winter the villagers observed a festival where the little girl wanted to go. But as her grandma was very old and had no extra money to spend so always the granny had to make excuses to refrain her from going there.
That night it was freezing outside. The little girl was tucked on her bed but she was not sleeping rather her cheeks were flooding. But she was not blaming her granny as she knew her granny could not effort the expense for buying any toys or allowing her to watch the circus. Then finally she felt in sleep.
Next morning when she woke up she heard her granny was cooking something in their lowly kitchen and was singing. she became surprised! So, she fold her bed quickly and went out to see.
There she found her granny in a new dress and in a jovial mood. She greeted her granny and wanted to ask a question. But, her granny raised her index to a little pony who was grazing on the yard. " come on, my dear, have some cakes and get ready for the festival', said the granny with a smile.
''Festival, how come it possible, where does she get money?', the girl started thinking but again her granny stopped her. The girl went to get ready there she found a new beautiful dress for her! " Oh...what is going on, does she get any wand? Okay, whatever it is, let the day pass in this way!', the girl murmured herself.
Then they rode on the pony and the pony took them in the festival. Everybody who knew the girl and her granny had been very happy to see them over there. The girl enjoyed the circus, ate her favorite cheese cake and bought a doll house. The girl thanked her granny for everything and when she told it was enough, they started back home.
After reaching home, the girl went to change her dress, there she found her granny!'' Hey, dear, where did you go? I had been searching you here and there but you were nowhere!'', said the granny.''
The girl told everything what she had been experienced from the early morning to mid-night. Hearing all, the granny smiled and nodded her head with great pleasure. She told the girl that it must be the white fairy who comes in every winter to make someone happy forever!
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nice story. Like it so much, thanks for sharing dear sis bet.
So beautiful story.I like it very much.Thanks for sharing dear bet!
Thanks, Elen and Dila...for liking!
Ohh, I am surprised! Actually, I was sure that the girl was dreaming and when she would wake up she would be dissapointed.
Good story, bet, bravo :) I wish there were a real white fairy to make our dreams come true...
Whenever you like, dear!
Well, here are my corrections. Sure, you can always ask the questions.
Once upon a time there lived a little girl in a hill-side small village.__ Every winter the villagers had a festival where the little girl wanted to go. But as her grandma was very old and had no extra money to spend. So, she always had to excuse herself for not letting the girl go there.
That night it was freezing outside. The little girl__ tucked on her bed but she was not sleeping rather her cheeks were flooding (Cheeks can’t flood. Do you mean she was crying?). But she was not blaming her granny as she knew her granny could not afford __ buying any toys or allowing her to watch the circus. Then, she finally felt asleep.
When she woke up next morning she heard her granny__ cooking and singing something in their lowly kitchen. She was surprised! So, she made her bed quickly and went out to see (what was going on).
There she found her granny in a new dress and in the jovial mood. She greeted her granny and wanted to ask a question. But, her granny pointed her index finger to a little pony which was grazing on the yard. "Come on, my dear, have some cakes and get ready for the festival', said the granny with a smile.
''Festival, how come it is possible, where has she got the money?', the girl started thinking but again her granny stopped her. The girl went to get ready. In her room, she found a new beautiful dress for her! " “Oh...what is going on, does she get any magic wand? Okay, whatever it is, let the day pass __ this way!', murmured the girl to herself.
Then they rode __ the pony and the pony took them to the festival. Everybody who knew the girl and her granny was very happy to see them over there. The girl enjoyed the circus, ate her favorite cheese cake and bought a doll house. The girl thanked her granny for everything and when she told it was enough, they started back home.
After reaching home, the girl went to change her dress and there she found her granny!'' Hey, dear, where have you been? I was looking for you here and there but you were nowhere!'', said __granny.''
The girl told everything what she had __ experienced from the early morning to midnight. Having heard all, __granny smiled and nodded her head with great pleasure. She told the girl that it must have been the white fairy who comes in every winter to make someone happy forever!
Well, dear Bet! It is a well-written story. I see, your English has improved much! But honestly, I like your first tale more. I will make some corrections later, OK?