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Expector Smith's Blog Challenge: It is/was...that(who

Posted by Mishaikh on January 15, 2016

Blog Challenge: It is/was...that(who) Cleft Sentences

 

 

I was not the one who parted away.  It was her who phoned me a few days ago that she was leaving me.  It was me who shocked to hear that no relationship now existed between me and her.  There remain only the ruins of memories.  How I was happy to meet her. She was the one who made me join the group of her friends. I was not the one to be  responsible that her close friend was attracted towards me.  It was me who never minded her talking with other boys in the group.  I am the one who has all the bearings.  I didn’t invite her friend to dinner.  It was her who invited me.  I thought that she will also be there with other friends.  It was not my fault that I was the only guest at the party.  And then I got the news that she was leaving me even before the food I ate at the dinner was digested completely.

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  • Mishaikh January 17, 2016 15:03

    Thanks Afro and Sophi for your comments.

  • bet January 17, 2016 6:28

    You should make a phone call before attending the party. Specially to know in which  dress she wanted to see you over there. It might help you to digest your food....lol

  • Mishaikh January 17, 2016 2:27

    Thanks setareh, Icha, JP for appreciating comments.

  • Mishaikh January 17, 2016 2:25

    Modified as advised Expector.  Thanks a lot.  Do let me know if still require the correction. 

  • Expector Smith January 17, 2016 2:06

    @Mishaikh

    Thanks for sharing this structure 'She's the person/woman who...' - another type of cleft sentence. But, it seems you failed to fix the sentence. Hint: It's the word 'make' that you should pay attention to. You say 'make someone do something' - not 'to do' or 'doing' or 'did'. 

  • Icha January 17, 2016 1:17

    Hi Misha, it is a good story although sad ending and it always tell about love ya? :-)  

    As I know you are a one of the best bloggers here on myEC. Salute for your all creativity. All of them are the good and inspiring ones especially for the new bloggers as me.

    Thanks for sharing :-) 

  • setareh January 16, 2016 17:44

    Dear Mishaikh, very well written with great use of cleft sentences. Thanks foe sharing.

  • Mishaikh January 16, 2016 17:32

    Thanks Eva, Chitra and saba for the comment and appreciations.

  • Mishaikh January 16, 2016 17:32

    Thanks Expector for your guidance.   Necessary correction has been made.

  • Onee-chan January 15, 2016 23:32

    Fine Imagination! It was you who always made members melting....:)))))))

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