R E F L E C T I O N
It is the bird that whistles the lovely voices
It is the forest that provides much oxygen for us
It is the sea that is rich in various kinds of marine lifes
It is the earth that we should protect from corruptness ...
It was jealousy that separated brothers
It was hatred that made two people hostile
It was grudge that brought on all the things possible
It was greed that caused the world war happen ...
It is for a peacefulness that we should respect each others
It is to get health that people take care of the body
It is about the improvement that we need to talk
It is from the heart that somebody could change ...
Let us keep the earth... Let us prevent the hostility... Let us change to be better...
It was a long long time ago that human learnt communicating
It was Before Christ that people could do writing and computing
It was after the phone invention that the scientist found computer
It was in this century that regardless distance we could meet each other ...
Let me say it is human who has a great brain ...
It is the mother whose affection is never ending
It is the family who always supports me, BUT ...
It is you, it's only you whom I want to meet all this time ...
(wandering somewhere.........)
Just a poem by Onee ^^
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Honestly, I didn't know the theme of this poem. Neither love, nor friendship, nor society, nor about earth. lol... Then just came out the tittle "REFLECTION" :D Thank you very much for this useful challenge, dear Expector. I learn a lot from this. To all the readers, thank you so much for spending your time to read this poem. Let me know if you like it. Correction will be highly appreciated. ^^
Comments
Is it a poem challenge ? wow
really nice....
Its you inside.. voice of your heart.. observation of all happening around you.. :)
I liked it..
My sister Onee, Your poem is so valuable. good writing as always ;) I like it, thank you:))
You did prove it.
Onee, very nice and colorful poem, you are very creative! I like all words especially the last paragraph. Good job!
My bro Nimzaf, glad to hear from you again. Thank you lots for your lovely comment. :)
Estanis, my Spanish friend. :D So, you got it. Glad that you love it. :)) Thank youu...
Hi Siska, Thank you for your time to read and liking my poem. I really feel glad. :)
Dear Saba, many thanks for your beautiful comment. I hope people will agree with my simple thought. Thanks for your support. ^^
Dear Sir ModaWay, I'm so honored you spent the time for commenting on my blog. Thank you very much for your nice words, Sir. Have a great week! :)
Wow, Peppo! I'm so flattered by your words. Big thanks for your sweet comment. ^^
Dear Adaline, Thank you a lot for your lovely comment. Glad to hear you again. :)
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