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Expector's Writing Challenge: Besides, Except

Posted by Arif on July 27, 2016

There were so many friends, who came and went in my life without being noticed, but Ahmed left long lasting impression on me. He used to sit beside me at the same desk during the class. He always encouraged me whenever I hesitated to do anything new. When I performed bad, all the classmates laughed at me except him. Besides this, he always told me very confidential matters without fear of being betrayed.

I used to make fun of him whenever he talked to me about his fiancee. Hearing the name of his beloved, he used to blush. Apart from joking, he loved her so much even more than his own life. I have really missed him since he left for London. We hardly take time to communicate. Besides communication on Skype, we write letters to each other. By doing so, we enjoyed a lot.

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  • Arif July 30, 2016 8:44
    Thank Shoba for your appreciation and comment.
  • Shoba July 29, 2016 15:42

    Nice writing, Arif. 

    I am happy that you have a friend who is worth writing about.  :) 

  • Arif July 29, 2016 11:56
    Mitran,
    You enjoyed reading my blog. I feel great :)

    Thank you for sharing your opinion.
  • mitran July 29, 2016 4:44

    You made me laugh about : his fiancee...

    Thanks for your blog.

  • Arif July 28, 2016 8:57
    Dear sister
    He is my compatriot and our writing somehow reflect our literatures.

    Thank you for the comment and appreciating both of us at the same time. :D

    Have a blessed day ahead!
  • Arif July 28, 2016 8:52
    Sheila, thank for the comment.
  • Arif July 28, 2016 8:51
    Mr. Expector,

    Yes, I had some questions, but it's OK :). I understood them in my own way. :)

    Thank once again for your response.
  • Arif July 28, 2016 8:46
    Dearest sister, Onee-chan
    It's fortunate to have a good friend. Yes, unnecessary suspects caused by our negligence makes it difficult to maintain. When you are desirous to keep a good friend for a long term, you must be conscious about your words and actions.

    Thank you my dearest sister for visiting and leaving comments.
  • Someone July 28, 2016 8:41

    Dear Brother,

    I observed that you took short time to post it but don't aware that you published it through cell phone. I cant write without my desktop. Hats off you and mishaike because both of you took very short time to put your thoughts down in writing. 

  • Arif July 28, 2016 8:30
    Dear sister,

    Thank for the comment. Yes, I responded to the challenge within 30 minutes and typed the texts as fast as possible via my cellphone. :D

    Cheer! :)
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