In Suzhou
I just got back from Suzhou. It is a City near Shanghai. But it is not as busy as Shanghai. Instead it is a city which has the flavor of a village.
We liked the vibes and everything over there. On the way from Shanghai to Suzu there were many things to see. It looked like the country side. We enjoyed fisherman's houses, ducks and ducklings, meadows, cherry blooms and so on.
One day we went to a Lake side. There we enjoyed the scenic beauty of the lake. But the day was windy and cold. Last year we went to see lake superior. Lakes play an important role in our life as they are the main source of fresh water in this earth. So, we should maintain them properly.
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Thanks everyone!
Very well written. Thanks for sharing your experience Afro.
Well Done!
Excellent!
Re corrections: Some of the sentences need improving:
1. 'Recently I have been in Suzhou.' - It sounds like you are still in Suzhoud, but actually you've come back (in Bangladesh). You can say 'I've just come back from Suzhou.'
2. 'It is a City nearby Shanghai.' - You say 'somewhere is near somewhere else'. You should have used 'near' instead of 'nearby'. So the sentence should read: 'It is near Shanghai', or 'It is a city which is near Shanghai'.
3. 'It seemed acountry side.' - You can say ' It seemed/looked like the countryside/country.'
And, you should have used 'lakeside', 'Lake Superior', 'on earth' instead.
Keep it up!