"Hello, hello, is anybody here? No answer! It seems someone is inside the house but no one comes to show up. Can anyone hear me? Listen, I am a passer by, coming from far away and I need help''.
" Hey, what do you want?'' Finally someone peeped out the window. '' Thanks, you finally came up, I need some water. Have you any water?'' "'Oh, yes, man, I have some. Okay, come in."
Then, the passerby stepped into the house. It was such a hot day, perspiration formed on his forehead. Mr. cafi asked, '' why are you roaming on the street under the sun?''
" Oh, it is a long story. I am from Danvor. I rode into a bus. Suddenly a person pushed me and my wallet fall down. When I bent over to get it, I found there was no money. It's true. So, now I have hardly any money to get a vehicle and buy me any drinks!
'' So, can you tell me what I can do now? '' No, I have no idea right now but let me think.''
p.s. can I say....are there any letters/ is there any letters?
Comments
Nice blog dear Afro. Good job and thanks for sharing.
Thanks a lot, smith and onee for doing corrections.
Nice conversation! If you don't mind to consider this...
*** Do you have any water?
Thank you for writing. I always enjoy reading your blogs. :)
Great!
You put all the any's in a proper scene, and you used a lot of 'direct speech' - I really appreciate it!
I've correted some mistakes in the blog - some of them are just typos:
1. 'Can anyone here (hear) me?'
2. 'I have any (any is a pronoun of water) (some/some water)'
3. 'the passerby steeped (stepped) into the house'
4. 'I am coming from Danvor.'
5. 'I have no idea(s) right now but let me think.'
6. 'are there any letters/ is there any letters?'
Hope you get it!