Hello pretty girl,
Let me ask you first, how are you in such a lovely winter morning? I think, you are passing a very busy time with your study. But, why you are not writing me, are your days hectic? Here, I am also too busy, of course, with my usual duty. Anyway, do you want to hear how did I pass the last two months?
Then listen, I went to a rocky mountain area with my close friends in last month. In a sunny-Autumn morning we started our journey. We didn't book any cottage or hotel but we were not afraid at all. We just wanted to get lost in a wilderness!
To go there, we hired a tiny taxi instead a large taxi due to our limited budget. Our destination was far away so, we got chance to see, to move around more. To cartel our costing, we did many weird things. For example, we ate most of the time in lowly restaurants, we bought cheap clothing and souvenirs.
But, we enjoyed a lot. we watched lurid sky, we smelt the scent of the wild flowers, we ran after some wild fowls and we walked through a barren field in a misty evening! Hey, do you want to hear more, no, I wouldn't because I am mad on you. So, write me hurriedly.
Bye, take care.
I am.
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Great work Afro. I did not understand the contents well.
@afro
Here's the link to "adjective order".
Afro, did you run after wild fowls or you chased them? =))) I thought only kids do that hehe.
Read mine dear :))
Expector's Writing Challenge: A Horrible Visit To The Museum!!
Oh lovely dear!!
Nice writing!
You should put adjectives in front of or after every noun in a sentence, which is key to this "adjective challenge". Sometimes it doesn't make so much sense to put one or more adjectives in front of a noun, but we are trying to practice adjectives. So, can you use adjectives in front of the noun of "your study", "your days", "our journey", "any cottage"...?
Keep in mind words such as "your", "our", "any", "a", or "the" are not adjectives, even though they do come in front of a noun.
Re correction:
There is a common error in this sentence: "Anyway, do you want to hear how did I pass the last two months?" English tip: "did" in the sentence is redundant. More examples for you:
--Do you want to know how I write a blog?
--Are you curious about how they learn English?
Even when she's mad at her friend, she still writes to her. That's very nice of her.