Every child loves birthday party and presents, so I always have something up my sleeves to catch my kids off guard. Once we were on a trip; it was their birthday but it seemed like they had forgotten it. So when we came back from sightseeing I asked my sister to take them to yard and keep them busy, then my husband and I went to a confectionery and bought some balloons, a birthday cake, candles and of course presents . I will never forget their happy face as soon as they entered the room.
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Dear Adeline, Thanks for your compliment. I hope my kids think like you.:)
Dear Just, yes they are.
Dear mitran, I'm pleases to meet you too.:)
Great job, Danny!
Anyway I appreciate you for taking time and helping us.
Great job!
The last sentence can be rephrased, though - you could have used 'when' instead of 'as soon as'. You can say 'As soon as they entered the room, I opened the box.' or 'I'll open the box as soon as I can or as soon as possible.'
Hope you get it! Keep it up!
..........their happy faces..............
This may be only a typo.
Nicely and emotionally written setareh.