Ella was worried about her Broken frame yesterday.. When Emma (her elder sis) saw her worried about her frame.. She said to her that You can make frames at home, too.. don't be sad.. She gave her many amazing ideas making frames in home. Ella hugged her happily and whispered "You always has something up your sleeve".
<My first attempt in idiom challenge>
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#noaslpls thanks for stopping by..
#night: thanks for your comment.. you are right I should not get the ENGLISH equivalent to Urdu.. but I always try my best.. my vocabulary is weak and I am trying to improve it.. you are welcome to give me suggestion about improving my English language..
Nice story Elf Noor.
Thanks for appreciation.
You liked it..am glad
#Expector Smith: This is what I wanted to know about my writing.. thanks alot for correcting my small mistakes, it is really helpful.. and next time I will be more careful during writing and publishing blog...
Thanks for being here.. really glad to have such a great teacher..
#Batuhan: thanks for stopping by and for your suggestion.. i really appreciate your comment here..!!
#setareh : I am glad that you liked it..
#Seeker thanks for comment.
#Mishaikh thanks for correction.. really glad to have your comment..
Great!
I'm pleased Mishaikh and Batuhan have helped correct you. I made some small corrections for you, too:
Ella was worried (about) yesterday, because her Broken frame (yesterday). When Emma (her elder sis) saw her worried (worrying) about her frame, She (she said to her), suggested her "you (You) can make frame (frames) at home too...don't be sad." She gave her many amazing ideas about frame making (frames) in home. Ella hugged her happily and whispered, "you (You) always has something up in your sleeve".
Hope you get it! Keep it up!
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