'I haven't felt anything like this before It was a wonderful feeling to have your own child', Tom said. He didn't get any idea, how to raise a child but Tom and Layla were excited about their first child. Tom was redundant from his work few months ago, So he called his mum and asked for help. Tom told mum, 'I haven't got any money on me mum you have to help me out until I find a job'. Tom was wondering , Does this get any better? It's very hard to live with out any money. After few months of struggling, Tom went to attend an interview in a Council building. Security asked Tom, 'do you have any ID on you?' . Tom was successful at the interview, he got appointed faraway from home. Layla said take it, anywhere is fine, I can manage. On his way Tom went to do shopping in a corner shop to get milk powder and few other essentials, shop keeper said I don't accept card do you have any cash? Tom said 'no' and he walked towards home. He saw gas men working in- front of his house, Layla said there was a gas leak I called them. Tom asked the men 'are we in any danger?'. They said 'no'. Layla asked did you buy any milk powder? I haven't got any.
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Dear Onee, Thank you so much for taking your time reading and correcting, I appreciate it sweet heart.
Thank you Mohammad.
I'm sorry for not commenting here. I didn't have much time last week. But now I'm here. ^_^
If you don't mind to consider my correction.
*He didn't get any idea how to raise a child (because it was in the past)
*Does this get any better? (get is a verb)
You always have a nice story, dear Adaline. Good job! ^_^
Good job!
Dear JET, Mishaikh, Bathuhan, Shoba, Evangelina, Onee & Sher, Thank you so much for reading and liking. I appreciate it.
My dear Evangelina, Thank you so much for taking your time reading and comment I appreciate it sweet heart.
Dear Mishaikh, Thank you so much for taking your time reading and comment. I appreciate it. Yes it is getting better :))
Dear JET, Thank you so much for taking your time reading and comment. I appreciate it.
Dear Expector, Thank you so much for taking your time reading and suggesting the corrections. I appreciate it. Some corrections have made. Thank you.
Is this get any better?
Is this getting any better? (OR Does it get any better?)
Well done Ada.
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