Reena is a singer, she participate in this years 'X' factor singing competition. She is interested in acting as well. 'I want to be a heroine' announced Reena. Mum was reading the news paper and shouted at me,' Did you hear that? 'Reena announced that she wanted to be a heroine. I said, 'Is it mum?'. When I walked to the door Elle came in, I was wearing a purple jacket, 'I like your jacket' commented Elle. I told mum 'Elle commented that she liked my jacket'. 'Shall we get one for her mum?' Mum said, 'okay'.
'I want my breakfast now' demanded brother. Mum! Brother demanded that he wanted his breakfast now' I said . Mum said, she was going to make now, wait little bit please'.
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My Sweet Alice, Thank you so much for taking your time reading and leaving your comment, I appreciate it.
Thank you for taking your time reading and liking my dear Setarah!
Dear Shoba, Serene, Kal, RK, Evangelina& Shaila, Thank you so much for reading liking the blog. I appreciate it.
Der sweet Shoba, Thank yo for taking your time reading and leaving your lovely comment. I appreciate it sweet heart.
Dear Expector, Thank you for the challenge and thank you for reading and correcting, I really appreciate it. Corrections were made as you suggest. Thank you
Good try, dear Adaline. You have described a scene that happens at our places in our everyday life. Simple and nice story. Thank you for sharing.
Hi Adaline! What a speedy response from you to answer the challenge! Good job! :)
Well done! I enjoyed the story!
You should know how to punctuate 'quote structures' or 'direct speech' - don't omit the comma after or before 'she said or he said', and, if you put something like 'she said' after the direct speech, you put a comma in front of the second quotation mark, not a full stop, for example: 'I want to be a heroine,' announced Reena. I said, 'Is it mum?' 'I like your jacket, ' commented Elle.
Also, you should change the pronouns when you use reported/indirect speech, for example, 'Mum said I am (she was) going to make now, wait little bit please.'
Hope you get it!
Enna vendum Adaline Bala? We are friends and we should support one another. extend my regards to your respected family.
Dear Mr. Dara, Thank you so much for taking your time reading and cooment I appreciate it. I got a cousin Reena, when I write I thought of her. Say hello to your Reena for me!
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