Beauty always holds its bright sense of holiness.
It’s indeed, so cool to get a chance of taking a picture with a bunch of swans and it’s a boon of god when they greet me with lovely sounds. It’s amazing when they are gliding serenely in a group on their way, and it seems beauty holds its bright sense of holiness. But one of the lovely Sawn looking restless seems it’s waiting for its partner and refusing to do its work. Without its partner companion, it’s May not care to do anything and emerge to be wrapped up in its own thought or something unwillingly cross its mind more than usual.
PS:I wonder if it’s ( it has) weird thoughts like me.
I inspired to upload the picture by Peppo.
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Thank you so much, dear Shoba! I appreciated it.
Your post is mesmerizing and reminds me that I should spend more time with the nature and its gifts, dear Serene. Thanks for sharing.
Dear Adorable Eva! My blog is waiting to get your comment. now it getting live . So lovely and encouraging comments ! I appreciated your presence a lot around here.
And thanks a lot for understanding me. hugs.
Dear Smith! Thank a lot for taking your precious time to correct the mistakes. I am so glad that this time I did not make so many mistakes, that means day by day I am improving my English....:).
I will fix the error in a while. Thanks again for the clarification that help me to understand effortlessly.
Good job!
It seems we need to work on this sentence: 'It’s looking amazing when they are gliding serenely in a group on its way, seems the beauty holds its bright sense of holiness.'. You can say 'It's amazing...' or 'It looks amazing...', but not 'It's looking amazing...'.
You shouldn't combine two sentences with a comma ('comma splice'). You could say 'It's amazing..., and it seems...'. That is, you should use a comma and the word 'and' (, and). So, the sentence should read: 'It’s looking amazing when they are gliding serenely in a group on its (their) way, seems (and it seems) the beauty holds its bright sense of holiness.'
Hope you get it!
Dear Peppo!I am deeply touched, honored by the gesture of you .
Thank you serene :)
Dear Peppo! Your comments inspired me to attach the photo of the Swan.. Thank you, dear, for inspiring me . Have a pleasant weekend.
What a nice blog you wrote ^^
I read your comment also. If you think those swans are greeted you, then it is true. They know there is a wounded heart needs to be healed.
Have a pleasant weekend!!!
Dear Mishaikh! It is a big honor when a great writer praise me, Thanks a lot.
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