Noasl,pearl,common mass,u shaikh,sandra thanks for commenting for my blog and for your valuable words..
lady anne,thanks a lot for your correction. next time I will concentrate on this mistake when i am writing :)
I can imagine how thankful you must be when you woke up from that dream. Whew! That was indeed a great relief.
It's great of you to share this story with us since we can also learn something from it. Thanks a bunch.
For correction: (Please remember your mistakes so that you will not be able to commit them again.)
Today I got a heart touching forward message from one of my friends, (it is always correct to write one of my friends (not friend), one of my bags (not bag)
She is questioning to one of her close friends. that”Hey don’t you have class today?”
Today people are running behindafter the money.
After long days, she was goingable to sleep happily because as all of you know, the exam is thea big tension .
There werewasa crowd and she was surprised because all her friends gathered.andShe has abegan to doubt and the question was raised in her mind that,asked, “why are they crying?”
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yesss..... every day is precious as none of us knows when or where our journey will end..........
lady anne,thanks a lot for your correction. next time I will concentrate on this mistake when i am writing :)
excellent writing skill
excellent
I can imagine how thankful you must be when you woke up from that dream. Whew! That was indeed a great relief.
It's great of you to share this story with us since we can also learn something from it. Thanks a bunch.
For correction: (Please remember your mistakes so that you will not be able to commit them again.)
Today I got a heart touching forward message from one of my friends, (it is always correct to write one of my friends (not friend), one of my bags (not bag)
She is questioning to one of her close friends. that”Hey don’t you have class today?”
Today people are running behind after the money.
After long days, she was going able to sleep happily because as all of you know, the exam is the a big tension .
There were was a crowd and she was surprised because all her friends gathered. and She has a began to doubt and the question was raised in her mind that, asked, “why are they crying?”
She had been given the second chance of improving the quality of her life. How fortunate was she.
Its really good story.Thanks for sharing with us.