Dear members

Another bad side of my beloved country.

An experience of years being among heterogeneous people and behavior of western people has greatly convinced me to review my fun blog which was written describing the repulsive attitude of western wife. Whereas, such kind of wife is found in majority in my country, especially in my home city, Karachi. These are thankless wives, who are suffered from complex inferiority and make their husband involve in corruption and other evils. Generally, People know that my country has a high rate of corruption, but they don't know that these modern wives, having limitless desires, are the root of the corruption. So, choose wife wisely. :)

The best criticism is the self-criticism but in a funny way. So, please read it with a smile :)

 

Modest  husband  Modern wife
He   is   bread  she  is  knife

Expensive dresses most she like
For  he  sells   his  motorbike

Working  all  day  he is  tired
Then She orders to cradle child

When  she  is  angry  he  smiles
When   he  is  angry  she  bites

He sacrificed  to keep her safe
Over  trifles, a  punch  she gave

She snatches the salary  he earns
He  asks  for a  penny  she frowns

 

Reading story of his sorrowful life 
The  tears roll down everyone's eyes

Innocent  husband   cruel   wife 
yet  he  is  wrong  she is right

 Poet  confused  to take whose sides
The society calls  it women  rights

Modest  husband  modern  wife
He  is  bread   she  is   knife

Poet       Arif Saeed.

Publisher  myenglishclub.com 

 

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  • Dear coral,
    You know I always love your very interesting question :D you follow my way. Do or think different from others. :)

    Your question is if I were the seller of expensive dresses, did I agree that sentence?

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    I, as a seller would definitely enjoy selling the most expensive dresses, expecting maximum profit, to the modest husband, he (husband) should be in trouble not I. By selling more expensive dresses, I could try to keep my modern and thankless wife happy. This is just for fun.

    In reality, the fish of salty water can't survive in sweet water. Similarly, the fish of sweet water can't remain alive in salty water. They must know their instincts, accept them and choose the partner who suit them most.

    Thank you for sharing your opinions.
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      nice poem I enjoyed reading it . I have a question If you were a seller of expensive dresses. Do you agree with this sentense ? most she like expensive dresses.

  • Now I could sense why it is  the symptom of sadness in your place :) OK I won't say, it reveals the life of almost all modest husband when they mistakenly marry with modern wife.
    A poet in this blog expressed his general observations nor his personal life.
    Thank you so much for making your point clear. I liked it.
  • Arif! Here in my place beard is the symptom of sadness. You poem reveals the sadness behind your beard. I could sense now.

    Lol! It is just for joking. Don't say the poem does not reveal my life. I know a little truth and the imagination can come as poem. I really like your rhyming and theme. Don't want to take seriously.

  • Shubu, may you elaborate your comments?
  • Well Luci, sadly to say that if mindful members of my EC act like mindless member. Then whom should I write my blog for? :) If you read the line you quoted below once again, especially this line

    " which W A S written describing the repulsive attitude of western wife."

    You will find easily that it was the past tense, dear Anyway, I feel glad to make it clear. Thank you for asking I really appreciate it.
  • Arif,

    this is your paragraph, right?

    An experience of years being among heterogeneous people and behavior of western people has greatly convinced me to review my fun blog which was written describing the repulsive attitude of western wife.

    Well, on the basis of it, I left my comment to show you that in my country nothing like this happen and it is kinda sad that you took it as if I wanted to prove myself something. I just wanted to show you that here life is not like this and do you know why? Our women work and this is maybe the most important point. If they want more money, both - man and woman work and then they can get better life. So this is point of my comment.

  • That's why you have a beard Arif! 

  • Estanis,
    The women in your country are neither western nor eastern, then must be southern @_@ don't worry, this blog is all about women in my country :D
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