Good Day everyone.
Hope you are doing well.
I am very much happy to see your reaction upon my last video “ A Beautiful Rainy Day” that I posted in my last vlog post.
Many of you have made comments and given your feedback. Some of you sent me personal messages about the wrong pronunciation. I noted all of your feedback.
Thank you very much for that.
Actually I am gonna attend a pre-recorded video contest at the end of this month. So the video was part of the experiment, your responses tell that it's a good topic.
So I want to improve my content, already edited and updated.
Following this post I posted my script of that video, if you have any suggestion please feel free to comment or personal message.
You can change whatever you want. even you can talk about my vocal variety and expression too. Just copy it and after editing you may comment or send me a message. letter on I will merge all of your recommendations.
I am sure that if I win the contest you would feel proud that your contribution makes me successful.
I feel proud that I am in the right place where I have a lot of helpful friends.
Best regards.
Video link: https://youtu.be/4u3AyY2gGYA
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“Sunshine is delicious, rain is refreshing, wind braces us up, snow is exhilarating; there is really no such thing as bad weather, only different kinds of good weather.” John Ruskin
Good Day Everyone.
This is fake from the fake world
I am very much hoping that you are having a great time with your family and friends. I am sure that you are confident and hopeful during these corona pandemic days.
“In nature, nothing is perfect and everything is perfect. Alice Walker”
Let us walk with me for several minutes and enjoy nature. During this time, you can talk with a pigeon and refresh yourself with rainy water. You can hear the natural sound, green leaves which are welcoming you.
“Everybody wants happiness, and nobody wants pain, but you can't have a rainbow without a little rain.”Zion Lee.
I was thinking about what to do? Because if I cannot go for outdoor activities during weekends, I feel very sad, awful, become lazy with my mobile phone. Then I took my umbrella and a pair of sandals and came out observing the shower of nature.
Yes, it is after a long time, I am walking on such a rainy day
Sounds of a waterfall on an umbrella remind me of my golden time that is childhood.
My family used to live in a village inside a tin shed house.
During a massive rainy day, I frequently skipped school and had been gone for a long sleep. There were not any sounds without a waterfall on the tin shed. Mom came to me at lunchtime and kept her mouth close to my ear and shouted, "Hi, fake! It'sIt's lunchtime, wake up now, don't you feel hungry?"
Then I woke up hurriedly and went out for a shower under the open sky with my crazy friends. After one or more hours we came, and I would see mom still waiting for me to have lunch.
However, after a long time, I have been going through the same feelings today.
Oh, I forgot to tell you that this river reminds me of another river beside my village. I often jumped from a gigantic bamboo bridge over the river.
“I spent my whole childhood wishing I were older and now I'm spending my adulthood wishing I were younger.”
Today is a fantastic day. The sight of these green leaves removes my eye stress. I am thinking about my golden time which is cleaning my rusty brain. Each breath reminds me each day from my childhood. Each footstep reminds me each year that I spent.
“In every walk with nature, one receives far more than he seeks.” John Muir
Greetings to all my friends, well-wishers, and all English learners.
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Comments
as always, nice shot Fake =D
I like your video and narration a lot. You have eyes of finding beauty. Below are a few suggestions on one of the paragraphs
"Let us walk with me for several minutes and enjoy nature. During this time, you can talk with a pigeon and refresh yourself with rainy water. You can hear the natural sound, green leaves which are welcoming you."
Below is the revised version
"Walk with me on a beautiful rainy day and enjoy moments of pure joy with nature. You can hear rain drops on the flower petals, river hops over rocks happily and you can even talk to a pigeon along the way. Walk with me and look around, you will find nature is welcoming you with open arms."
take it or leave it as you like.
Thanks Miya,
I liked it.
I will highly consider your suggestion.
Ahhh... it was lunchtime... That was a word I didn't understand. Anyways, I'm not good at correcting people. I'm out. :P
But Rys loves that... hehe - Good luck with your video! See you around.
You have already given me a correction...haha
I did??? Are you sure? Then without my knowledge or intention. XD
Ahh. it was lunchtime... That was a word I didn't understand...
Hmm... I guess you can see it that way. ;)
You are doggone right, NotAClue that I love those things, especially jumping into a river from a GIGANTIC.bamboo brigde! :-)
Jumping over a river is so much cooler than that. :-P