Loving you is the most exciting feeling ever

I will cast my spell unto you which is enticingly clever

Don’t be silly to reject what I could offer

Funny, you pick me up and trade some petals of clover

 

Look into my eyes and you will see through

My soul that eventually, gradually will captivate you

Don’t dare refuse, or look away, you’ve got nowhere to go

Embrace this feeling as I move forward and draw closer to subdue

 

Hold my hands and you will be mine

There is no turning back or my life will be in vain

Don’t go it is here where your heart belongs

Chain to tame and we will get along

 

Touch my face; can you feel how it longs for you?

Lingering expression that will haunt purlieu

Don’t be lost; this should not in be in waste

Collect your ideas of love and I will put in my case

 

Live with me, for this emotion is worth living for

Experience the warmth of my tender care

Afraid not, this is a meek and contrite heart

Obligingly pursue you to love me back…

 

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  • Thanks, Setareh! This is the chilling effect of AC unto my head, in my heart...hahaha...
    would you mind to be my friend?

  • Dear Risty, wow! who can say 'no' after reading this amazing poem. Your writings are wonderful. Thanks for sharing them.

  • Thank you, Elf! Smile!

  • I like the way you write poems... :)

  • Hello, Mishaikh! I should have been titled it as stone heart..haha! When it's about love, I'm not as poetic and expressive as you are.

    Thanks for trying to refine this poem.A smile from here! God bless!

  • Hello, Sir Dara! Thank you for liking this even if you don't understand, me either. hahaha! The feeling is not as nice as you are. It can never equate you..haha.

    Thanks! A smile from here and God bless you. 

  • There is no turning back or

    THIS IS MAGECAL WORLD, DON'T PAY ATTENTION ON THE VOICES, 

    IF YOU TURN BACK YOU WILL TURN INTO STONE.

  • Ikaw ay isang makata. Gusto ko siya. I like our poem although I do not understand much about poems in general. Or to put it in another way, I prefer something else. Nice feelings you put there. thanks for sharing!
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