Clarine was a capricious water sprite and she loved to be quite mischievous and prone to playing fairy tricks on people, she wasted most of her time wandering the rice fields and watching farmers sowing and reaping. The Land sprite kept on asking her why she loved to stay that way, why not to do her job and pour some rain to helped the farmers till the soil easier and cultivate the farm. Clarine, on the contrary, will generated snow to cover the fields so the farmer will find it difficult to plow the area and deposit the seeds. She finds pleasure seeing people suffer and hasty to do something to save the remaining crops or shovel the snow. She enjoyed the sight of a worried human because she was intrigued about person’s emotions.

One day, the Queen of all nature’s sprites lost her patience towards Clarine, resulting to summoned her to dispense justice with all her wrongdoings, the Queen said “because of your misbehavior and naughtiness that I don’t expect for a good sprite. We are here to help the people not to bring misery and affliction, and because you love to know how they will react, that the face of worries gives you delight. Tonight, I will claim your power and curse you, you will become a human being and we will see how gratified you’ll be experiencing the same.”

The next morning, as she opened her eyes and saw a wooden ceiling, she’s lying on a bed, someone’s bed! At the right side of her eyes, peripherally she saw a sleeping man, she rose from the bed and sit next to the sleeping man and checked his face. The man looked very tired and looked neglected. Her breath woke the man up and their eyes locked, for his’ ash gray and she has chestnut brown eyes. Is this loved at first sight? Her heart pounded like racing horses.

The man told her how he found her in the woods, naked and lying on the floor, so he decided to bring her home. The man is a widower, as she listened to the man’s life story, slowly she felts fondness for him and wants to console him. She asked how did the wife and son die, and he said,

“My wife died after my son’s deliverance. “

The man continued, “My child… that was one afternoon, we’re expecting for the rain to come but instead a snow came to pour the land, and covered almost the entire field and surroundings. My son loves to play and run with his friends, but that afternoon he made it alone because no child wants to go outside that’s why nobody accompanied him. Accidentally, my son slipped and hit his head on the rock. That’s the reason of his death.” She saw his deep sadness and she felt sore as if somebody struck her heart. It was her to be the sole responsible of that, what a shame! Does she want to pay the pain she gave to this guy while asking herself, why she felt this way? Why a sudden changed of heart?

She only has one answer. He saved me, or I love him? What is love? Why did I feel this way? What’s wrong with me, with my heart?

At her side, a human size mirror was placed, all of a sudden she saw her reflection, and her face… it was full of worries, melancholic eyes, and ache.

Now she knows.

(Disclaimer: Photo from google)

 

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  • Sir Danny, I'm almost speechless! How will I thank you for doing these corrections? I'm just hoping I didn't give you the hard time dealing with my story. Seems like and feels like I'm a flightless bird when it comes to grammar (preposition, past tenses..etc..) Oh boy! Sure, I'm not the brightest crayon in the box. :D

    I want to write more, I want you to read them, criticize them, correct if I'm wrong... I know I'm asking too much. But I really hope you will, until I can fly.

    Thank you so much, Sir, God bless you (please allow me, I really want to say this)

    So grateful, your meek student.

  • Wow, my plan worked! I'd love to, take me to your class, now.hahaha!

  • Dear Sweetest Pleasure, thank you. 

  • Dear Mishaikh, thank you for your kind correction. 

  • Dear Sir Danny, I’m in bliss to know you like it, we will never realize how it feels until we became subjected, whatever we do in life has something to do with other lives, and it’s just a matter of respect to our co-existence.

    I tried to make it past tense, but not sure if I’ve done it right. Well, I’m sure I didn’t make it right.

    Thanks Sir Danny.

  • Dear Luci, I’m sorry I don’t like you to feel depressed. Most of the time, those who are selfish are those who are lacking, they don’t want to impart the goodness in them, because they tend to think they don’t have that to share. Thanks Luci.

  • Dear Bet, thank you for your constant patience reading my stories here. 

  • Dear Sir Dara, I agree that the world needs love to keep it going but not only that. Clarine just got what she deserved. Thanks Sir Dara. 

  • lovely thing I noticed , the writing and the picture both are blue :D


    keep it up, nice design :P

  • Woman = widow
    man = widower

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