~ Chpt 8 : Poem ~

My first poem. I have wrote it few years ago and post it on the EC forum.. found it yesterday.. here goes..p/s : when i read it again.. its kinda lame.. lol..~ Forever ~I saw your faceI saw your smileMake me wonderWhat inside your heartI never realise this beforeThat I could like you even moreEventhough knowing you beforeWhy this feelings never showI felt happy when I'm with youFull of smiles from me to youI wish you're noticed that I like youMake me wonder that will you like me tooI try to be strong in many waysTry to hide this feeling awayHope you not knowing that I like youIt will be strangeness between twoI dont think that wise to doTo write a love letter just for youJust put Secret Admirer that will doYou will not knowing its from me to youI can't stop thinking about youMake me hate myself, I tell youI wish it will stop sooner or laterOnly time will tell just to rememberedMy heart felt emptyWhen I'm thinking of youMake me sad and hateTo have this feeling for youI can't explain my feeling to youMy heart start break into twoSee your face from far awayJust wondering if you could stayStay within my heartForever

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  • actually i dont know how to write either ngtdnghia.. i just wrote what in my thought at the time piece by piece..
  • Hi, this poem was good ^^
    I don't know how to write a poem, hiz...
  • thanks mayumi garcia for visiting my blog
  • (*.*)Ooh!I know that feeling very well...That kind of feelings that give you different emotion...Heart pounding whenever you are near him..ExCite even hearing just his name...but crying inside cos you can't just burst you feelings toward him cos you are just friends....So frustrating that he has never had a hint that you are already head over heels toward him...oh, love so wonderful but so complicated....

    Thank you Izzy for sharing it w/ us.....(thumbs up for you my friend!)
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