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Cause You're So Adorable

Posted by Achan Malaka on February 2, 2011

 

Honey, if I could look across the city from Mandonga to Kendari Bay

You would never be out of my sight

Say goodbye to loneliness because I would watch and gaze you every day

 I would be the greatest and dependable watcher you never expect

 

Honey, if I could reach the stars, I’d pull them down only for you

They would shine forever and you’d  see the truth of my love

Love which leads me to be crazy because of you

I’d do whatever it takes to show how much I care.

 

Honey, if I could be a mighty king, even for a minute

I would take you as my queen, sitting on the throne of my heart

You would be the greatest joy of my life because you are so adorable

Our love would be a kingdom, our hearts would never be apart

 

My dear, I always believe that our love will remain standing

Cause our love itself is indestructible

You know, I miss you so much tonight, oh my darling

Cause I wish you were here with me

 

Kendari, February 1, 2011

A-Chan

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  • Achan Malaka February 15, 2011 3:52
    I hope so and I will ;). Thanks, dear Alexandra.
  • Achan Malaka February 11, 2011 10:04
    Thanks so much, Bianca. Love should be kept forever in our heart.
  • Achan Malaka February 9, 2011 11:13
    Hello, Alexa. You are true. How can you guess that? I always fall in love easily with the girls around me, but I have no intention to make them as mine. This feeling is always with me when creating new poem. So, the adorable one I mean in this poem can be one of them, but I do not exactly who she is as well (because I love many girls hahaha). Thanks so much.
  • Achan Malaka February 9, 2011 11:09
    Thanks so much, Nebia. Yes, this is mine. Thanks for finding this poem romantic :).
  • Achan Malaka February 3, 2011 11:49
    Yes, I will, for sure. But, it will need long time to find her because I am still an undergraduate (yang anti pacaran hehehe)
  • Achan Malaka February 3, 2011 11:22

    @ Karenina and Anele

    The adorable one or your sister in law is still in search process. Wish me luck in finding her, okay :).

  • Achan Malaka February 3, 2011 11:19

    My lovely sister, Lilyana.

    Creating rhymes is so complicated to do. I needed one hour to write this poem because I wanted to be consistent in constructing its rhyme. Thanks for the praise, you are romantic as well ;).

     

    Attention, your sister in law has not been found yet hahaha..

  • Achan Malaka February 3, 2011 11:15

    Ye ye ye ye..my sister praises me hahaha..At the time, I just wrote what I was thinking, the words came out by themselves to my brain, but I was not in love. I do not know why, though. Maybe you're right, dear sister. Creating a poem needs strong emotion.

     

    A million thanks to you, my lovely sister.

  • Achan Malaka February 3, 2011 11:10
    Sister Nadiyah, thanks for the comment. Unfortunately, I haven't found her hahaha...but I will, for sure.
  • Achan Malaka February 3, 2011 11:09
    Hello, Salim. I am sorry because I have not found her at all. Maybe later ;). thanks for the comment, pal.
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