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Posted by Mishaikh on March 22, 2019

I honored 'love' and never complained.

I cried hard inside, never let the tear roll out.

It was a very harsh storm, tried very hard

to reach the bank, but it seemed to far.

I convinced and convinced my love,

Indifference only I found.

When she got ready to hear,

I could not say a word.

I didn't ask for the entire eden, all the springs

I wished just for a single flower of love

but could not find.

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Mishaikh April 1, 2019 18:05

Thanks you saba for all appreciations.
saba April 1, 2019 14:10

Very nice! I like it.
Rose March 27, 2019 16:41

You are always welcome, Mishaikh. Don't mention it.
Mishaikh March 27, 2019 16:06

Rose: Advised correction has been made. Thanks.
Mishaikh March 27, 2019 15:21

Thanks Rose. I will edit it later. I am on my cell at the moment from where I don't know how? But I will sure do from my laptop.

Meanwhile I will appreciate a few word commenting on the video I have recently posted. Thanks.
Rose March 27, 2019 13:50

Mishaikh,

if you don't mind, I would suggest you a correction of a little spelling mistake you have made in the fourth line of your writing.

Shouldn't it be it seemed too instead of seed to?
Mishaikh March 24, 2019 13:27

O.M.

Simple explanation of love: Respecting each other's ego.

Thanks for your kind explanation.
Mishaikh March 24, 2019 13:24

Very rightly said Rose. Thanks for your kind attention as always.
Rose March 23, 2019 18:19

Mishaikh,

Although we always seek for love, love follows its own will.
Love does not want to be found by us. Love wants finding us.
If it is the right time, love will find us, surprise us, and makes us happy forever.

Thanks once more for a lovely poem written by you.