Hello every one,
This is a fine way to reveal the inner soul's words withcomposing poems .To me it may happen so less in a while but I myself dont force me even. Maybe it is not correct to make poem's line in a language and interprete them to another language ! But ,I do it :) surprisingely the rhythm comes itself to not hurt my emotions and for this I am very appreciative indeed.
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My words’ power of attraction is in threat
Until you neglect the sky to up your head
My love, why am I missing my late
Honestly , weren’t you my fate?
Another time you empower me to say
How much you be aid to this tedious far way
I won’t betake my hope to go after your sail
Across my hair blowing the wind blare
Time tried to fail me down but I
Keep brave I’m yours , but just I
My heart began to be like a baby
Every night under moon I tell her story
Daddy will come back home wait my darling
He is seeing you now on the light of moony
You’ll come back and see your baby
Had grown unendingly with your glory
Silver moon ah that pill for the cure
Every time looked at it with your love
That was you crossed distance sailing back to me
My Sun ,if you’re let to sail with your dreams ?
You adventured to the sea and I waded to the sky
It ‘s the third season won’t you want to back ?
Help my honor my stories are going to end
To waves before you cross the seas ,
Said not to do like my heartbeats
Smiled and clouds shrunk aside
Final word had come by light of Sun
You said you submitted to my love
I sworn never see misgiving clouds
Come back the last season doesn’t come
He said me that until you come home
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Thank you for regard and beautiful look :)
≈Hani≈
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My dear friend,
Night jan , thank you very much for coming up to my post here and great words on behalf of liking :) you made me so cheerful by giving it consideration this is nothing rather than my heart's words finding some Earthy words near to them was not so hard :) My friend thinks I will write a book who knows if my heart can get some noble meaning inshallah .
Want you know that having persuasion of you is a great feeling and reason to do more of this job :) I always want to do whatever to make my dear true friends touch happiness .
My candy ,
Thank you a million for liking and encouragement sis :)) Indeed the meaning of Sun is true and suitable ;) and for the writer the statement of a Star as well , so both Sun and star are stars and in the sky are completing each ,only a subtle soul sees the essential being of the stars in the light and the darkness .
I like how you tell your feelings for another one's feeling my darling :) That is your beautiful sight of intuition and I admire it much .Romeo & Juliet yeah but with a wishful blossoming reach nah? ^_<
Red kisses :)
My dear Hani Sis,
I really feel a sweet feeling inside the way your use of metaphor. Your words come to me in tender touching :) At all time, people said that the Moon and the Sun are in love with each other, but they could never be together. In your story, I feel like "He" is the Sun, and the writer (you) is the Moon. Well, another imagination of mine, I feel like that is Romeo and Juliet... :P
Thanks my dear Hani for giving me such a lovely moment to enjoy this life :)
Warmest Regards,
Thank you very much my dear Hala, recognizing a nice thing requests a graceful soul as well and so are you :)
every profound faith is the resource of the bests containing patience to see salvation .Thanks a bunch for visiting and giving colour and essence to my words :)
Wonderful poem! I like your metaphors and images ,how love can make us strong and provide us with a hidden power to be brave and patient .
Hani,you have a great talent ,dear ,your nice soul can be seen through your words ! Keep it up !
Best wishes
Irina :))
Oh my breathes stopped for a second ! :) ThANK you so so much my angelic friend on the Earth muah.
My dear!!!! Utterly GORGEOUS! I won't be original in wishes but can say" your thoughts created your image" as your beauty, love and faithfulness. Thanks!
Yasemin, lovely sister :) He may most probably know and feel the feelings and also has a very strong excuse for the delay ,It is something out of our hand its a voyage of one of him but a harder one ! That is also a way must be walked in ,,, and a blossoms' way insallah :)
Thanks for reading and feeling me darling Im so appreciative and try to do my best nonstop :)
My lucid charos ,thank you too for all the good you say and supporting :) feeling captivation for your deeply sincere words to me life is so good to me :) I am really patient and surrendered myself and my love to the Almighty ,it is all god's will I know it .
Sending you my wide smiles now and then hopefully will see you shining tonight in my sky , my dear star Charos :)
Galina,my full of sweetness Galina ,thank you for a thousand times ,everything you pass to me is elegant and heavenly how much I get the bright intution of your lovely soul only God knows and he. :) For my dearest flowers like you each cell of me is able to compose glorious poems believe me and the reason of all the surprise you can identify is simply taking benefit from very nice people and friends to inspire :)
I hope will always make you happy and smiley most in the hard seasons of your life :) Thanks for reading,caring,giving and stellar wishes for my love :)God bless you for me .
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