Beauty and Talent

This is on the encouragement of Tanya's Writing Challenge: So and Such

She is so beautiful, and when she dances so beautifully, the time seems to stop.  It was such a nice day, when she came to the city with such a nice show of hers.  When I came to the show, there were so many people at the theater.  But everyone was so peacefully waiting in the queue to get a ticket.  The people were so much interested to see her dance that they didn’t mind standing in the rain.  I assumed everyone had got a ticket, only a few were left so much dejected.

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  • Thanks sewar.  I am glad you find my blogs enjoyable.  It is really appreciating.

  •     My friend, I like it. Really it is so lovely story, and when I read it so clearly many times, the time seems to stop. It was such a nice time, when I visited your page with such a big hope to spend a such an enjoyable time between so much delightful blogs. God bless you so much.  

  • Thanks Onee for liking and beautiful comment.

  • Dear Mishaikh,

    Beautiful writing! ^_^

  • Thanks Kal for your nice comment.

  • Dear Mishaikh,

    Really interesting your every blogs,and this short story is so beautiful.Many thanks for sharing.

  • Thanks Serene for your comment.

  • Dear Mishaikh! I read the story from Tanya's blog! Well written...:)

  • Thanks dara for your encouragement.

  • Main adas nahi manta. I hope I won't be dejected. It's so beautifully written. Thanks for your good efforts, Mr. Mishaikh!

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