Hello guys,
today some melancholic and sad mood wanted to destroy my optimistic soul, so I decided to go through the best therapy - to compose a poem. Autumn depression is here, exactly as I have described it in my blog about autumn, now I HATE YOU, AUTUMN!!! :-) Just pray for me so that it would be soon gone and I wouldn't bother you anymore with some silly poems :-D
HIDDEN IN THE MIST
At times I want to find myself in the thick mysterious mist,
in place where no people, no obstacles, nor limits exist.
It is magical place inside of my mind, little bit dark, no sun,
everything around is blured and I dream of the only one:
To immerse myself in endlessly deep ocean of thoughts,
to forget about own existence and feel happily lost.
I know such unique beautiful moment will hardly repeat,
I know the mist will soon disappear and we will never meet.
Hence right now I am enjoying my stay in this lost foggy world,
with all its indescribable feelings, full of untold hidden words.
Comments
I look back now and realized I needed the dark moment to be pulled into the beauty of such light .
very nice
Thank youuu, Yousra ;-) btw your autumn in algeria sounds like april weather here :-D
eva, wooow, great thank you so muchhh!!! Don't hesitate and post some poem here !!! M curious to read it.
Nawa, come, come :-) but don't forget to buy for example winter jacket :-D I will give you instruction how to wear it :-p
Aliiiii, heyyyyyyyyyyyy, I didn't have a clue you are such poet... :-o Nice poem and the first line made me laugh because I just imagine one word which rhymes with IT :-D
Sometimes I sit and think of...
Wonder if goodbye was worth it
I sit alone, and all I do is think of you
You
Sometimes it get's so very boring without you
I like to think of all our memories
I've got a lot about you
And at the time I sit alone
All I do is think of you
All you
I sit alone, and I think a lot
Sometimes when I am looking out my front window
I see the people there
They all breathe the air
The same as you and I do
But yet when I have said goodbyes
There's only one thing I can do
Is think of you
Sometimes I sit and think alone
I have daydreams and memories
Right here with me at home
I sit alone and think a lot about you
You
Long nights last winter you kept me company
I know the coming summer will be long for me
I'll sit alone and think a lot about you
You, you, you will be thinking
I'll sit alone and think a lot about you
I think I'll go down to the ocean
I'll speak there with the gods below
I'll talk of you
I'll sit alone and ask the waves
Just where I might go to find you
Nawa,
I love autumn when it is colorful but I hate it when depressive weather starts.. anyway, the problem is that last year we had almost no winter here, just twice for a while snow fell down but melted within few days... kids were sad and this year I guess it will be the same since now they promise that till the half of december there won't be snow.. but let's be positive, I think I am ok today and my this mood is gone :-)
Wow!!! No, it doesn't sounds good when its like that.
Hi Luci! My question is, why are you always depressed about the Autumn?
It look so beautiful to me. Does it have negative outcome?
ezark, nature is our inspiration :-)
Areal, hohohoooo, thats great you liked it and I fully agree on this with you - we have to get down on our knees to realize what life brings and what we forgot to appreciate.
Eva, wooow, nice lines, you should think about writing something like this!!! I can smell talent in you :-p
Dr. Eng. Modway, well I know that it is maybe too long, I mean every line but I hardly can make it shorten to express myself. Anyway, I will work on it and m aware of this :-) thanx for your comment
Seeker, m glad you liked it.
Mishaikh, well as for DREAM OF I have to disagree. DREAM OF is PHRASAL VERB. When you DREAM OF something - it means you imagine something like some wish etc. So I am sure here it isn't mistake...
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