attempt to a poem: Who am I?

I am the emptiness the blankness the wander
without you o the compass of my heart


I am the sleeplessness the nightmares the weariness 
If I can't embrace you at my night


I am the ignorance the nonsense the case of hopeless 
Oh, yes.. that's me without you in life


I am the drought the dearth the certain death,
If not irrigate your nectar to live

I am the bitterness of distance

the pain of eagerness

the flammable desire to concurrence

that never ends but with you.

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  • Alan, Thank you for your comment and congratulating.

    Camel, Thanks for the info !

    Dara, I am glad you like it.. and I will read you blog..

    Thank you for your encouragement.

  • Salam ya 1 Omer. Ma lei, ana mabsoot. I hope to be one of your friends. Can you see my blog, The Wedding and comment?

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