... and then one day
... and then one day they start slowly falling down,
sad tree losing its pride, losing its crown.
The sun is weaker, the wind is stronger,
all of these leaves can´t stay any longer...
... and then some day golden rain showers the street,
covered path, bench, even my favorite seat.
People dancing on the yellow carpet of leaves,
recalling nostalgic autumn memories...
... and then one day autumn magic will be gone,
lost between earlier sunset and later dawn.
Winter will hungrily eat everything alive,
nature is sleepy..but must fight to survive..
Comments
Beautiful poem, Luci! It reminded me a blog of you about the trip of a leaf, if I am not wrong.
thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating this little piece of writing :) I am glad you liked it ;) what a nice comment you left ;)
thanks a lot, Rose...I appreciate it as you are an awesome poet..so I feel flattered :p
thank you for nice comment, dear ;)
How amazing! not only rhyme but also the content and what's the most appreciable is writing a poem in another language that requires to have as poetic as lexical supplies.
So poetic and smart of you! :)
Amazing poem, Luci, I really like it. Well chosen words, good rhyme.
You are not only an excellent writer, you are also a good poet.
Thanks for this lovely poem.
Beautifully written as usual!
Thanks for sharing!
Well Done!
Yes, now I know that:) Btw both your stories are great!
thanx a lot for reading me and leaving such a beautiful comment..it makes me feel good to be able to describe autumn beauty for you as you don't know it ;)
thank you so much for your sincere and nice words ;) I do appreciate your comment a lot :)
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