My emotions flooded everywhere . I could barely breath when he left me . I felt that a part of my soul was dismantled without him around . Every and each minor detail was aching in my head
He left away without a good bye . She was worried . How is he doing now ?!
Is he okay or not . Oh Allah let him type one message to me and clam all my fears
Her status in Skype
" When we have had tightened our harnesses , to the backs of our horses , we have had talked and walked each in away , as if we have had never knew one another before "
After a month , there was a glimpse of hope . He was online a green light was there . She jumped up of happiness , and typed . Hello , my love are u okay
He typed her back . Yes , I am . She typed . I was so worried about u . He typed , I have to go now .....
Her status in Skype
" clouds with thunders
Clouds with rains
Fall upon my beloved home
With bless and gains
2 months have gone away . There is no sign of . It's seemed that he won't be back for ever .
Her status in Skype was
Oh lord my lord
It's his little things , that's are torturing me ,
Just his little things
Here is his newspaper thrown
Here is a book we have read together ,
On the couch are some of his cigarettes
In the room corners are pieces of his pieces ,
Why I am staring at the mirror , thinking what should I wear ,
Can I climb down that I hate him , how can I hate the one ,
Who dwells in my eyes ,
How can I flee away from my destiny
Can a river diverge his stream ,
I am in love with him ,
I don't know what did I loved in him
Even his flaws aren't flaws ,
Love is our handmade illusionment
If we didn't find , we'll make it up ,
What can I say , if he asked me , if I did love him
That I have had really loved him for more than a 1000 times ,
* these are famous arab love poems , the poets in order are as follow
Anonymous , Kalaf AlOtaibi , Nezar Kabani .
Comments
Thanks for being here dear Diah and feeling the experience of the girl in my story :)
A beautiful poem and very heart warming ;)
I feel like I'm in this kind of situation, because... that girl is real here. Hahaha
Yeah, it's so tragic.
Sorry but the book is written just in Arabic language.
and the title I given to it is just a translation.
Thanks ya youns for ur comment and the book title u have mentioned here . I will search for it online surely :)
Falling in love from one side is horrible, especially from woman side.
Because she suffers more.
I think sometimes we must read deeply about that.
And I think such things are solved in the famous book of Ibn El Qayim " Kindergarten lovers".
In this book anyone can find his problem with LOVE.
and the meaning of the real love.
Thank u dear Evangeline :)
It is sometimes strange and also thoughtful, that without even being aware us selves, we unconsciously become so dependent upon another persons presence in our lives.
Sometimes we even forget to appreciate. Silence can be devastating.
This is really heart touching, melancholic and sad. I am not good at decoding poetry, but I believe you managed perfectly to convey out the feelings.
Outstanding, Rosemary - Thumbs up, nice share :)
AG :)
Thanks dear Icha for ur admiration , it means a lot for me :)
Rosemary :)
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