My emotions flooded everywhere . I could barely breath when he left me . I felt that a part of my soul was dismantled without him around . Every and each minor detail was aching in my head
He left away without a good bye . She was worried . How is he doing now ?!
Is he okay or not . Oh Allah let him type one message to me and clam all my fears
Her status in Skype
" When we have had tightened our harnesses , to the backs of our horses , we have had talked and walked each in away , as if we have had never knew one another before "
After a month , there was a glimpse of hope . He was online a green light was there . She jumped up of happiness , and typed . Hello , my love are u okay
He typed her back . Yes , I am . She typed . I was so worried about u . He typed , I have to go now .....
Her status in Skype
" clouds with thunders
Clouds with rains
Fall upon my beloved home
With bless and gains
2 months have gone away . There is no sign of . It's seemed that he won't be back for ever .
Her status in Skype was
Oh lord my lord
It's his little things , that's are torturing me ,
Just his little things
Here is his newspaper thrown
Here is a book we have read together ,
On the couch are some of his cigarettes
In the room corners are pieces of his pieces ,
Why I am staring at the mirror , thinking what should I wear ,
Can I climb down that I hate him , how can I hate the one ,
Who dwells in my eyes ,
How can I flee away from my destiny
Can a river diverge his stream ,
I am in love with him ,
I don't know what did I loved in him
Even his flaws aren't flaws ,
Love is our handmade illusionment
If we didn't find , we'll make it up ,
What can I say , if he asked me , if I did love him
That I have had really loved him for more than a 1000 times ,
* these are famous arab love poems , the poets in order are as follow
Anonymous , Kalaf AlOtaibi , Nezar Kabani .
Comments
Thanks for being here dear Diah and feeling the experience of the girl in my story :)
A beautiful poem and very heart warming ;)
I feel like I'm in this kind of situation, because... that girl is real here. Hahaha
Yeah, it's so tragic.
Thanks ya youns for ur comment and the book title u have mentioned here . I will search for it online surely :)
Thank u dear Evangeline :)
AG :)
Thanks dear Icha for ur admiration , it means a lot for me :)
Rosemary :)
Hi Rosemary,
Wow, I was drowned in your story, it is beautiful describing though the sad ending. I can feel her love so deep and she suffered with the love itself. I couldn't imagine if I were in her shoes, and I don't want to be.
Thank you for sharing the combine of poem an story, if I say so (I am weak in understanding a poem, but for this is an exception)
Thanks Mishaikh ur appreciation means alot for me :)
Beautifully managed. Touched my heart. I find myself there in the fire or feeling the heat even living so far. But distance means nothing in emotional imagination. They are universally spread.
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