My emotions  flooded everywhere  . I could barely breath when he left me . I felt that a part of my soul was dismantled without him around . Every and each minor detail was aching in my head 

He left away without a good bye . She was worried  . How is he doing now ?!
  Is he okay or not . Oh Allah  let him type one message to me  and clam all my fears
 


Her status  in Skype 
" When we have had tightened  our harnesses  , to the backs  of our horses  , we have had talked and walked each in away  , as if we  have had never knew  one another  before "
  

After a month , there was a glimpse of hope . He was online a green light was there . She jumped up of happiness  , and typed  . Hello  , my love are u okay
He typed her back . Yes ,   I am  . She typed . I was so worried  about u  . He typed  , I have to go  now .....


Her status  in Skype 
" clouds with thunders
Clouds with rains
Fall upon my beloved  home
With bless and gains
 

2 months have gone away . There is no sign of . It's  seemed that he won't be back  for ever .

Her status  in Skype was
Oh lord my lord
It's his little things , that's are torturing  me  ,
Just his little  things


Here is his newspaper thrown
Here is a book we have read together  ,
On the couch are some of his cigarettes
In the room corners  are pieces of his pieces  ,

Why I am staring at the mirror  , thinking what should I wear  ,
Can I climb down that I hate him  , how can I hate the one  ,
Who dwells in my eyes  ,
How can I flee away from my destiny
Can a river diverge  his stream ,
I am in love with him ,
I don't know what did I loved in him
Even his flaws  aren't flaws  ,
Love is our handmade illusionment
If we didn't find , we'll  make it up  ,
What can I say  , if he asked me  , if I did love him
That I have had really loved  him for more than a 1000 times  ,


* these are famous arab love poems , the poets in order are as follow
Anonymous  , Kalaf AlOtaibi   , Nezar Kabani  .

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  • Thanks for being here dear Diah and feeling the experience of the girl in my story :)

  • A beautiful poem and very heart warming ;) 

    I feel like I'm in this kind of situation, because... that girl is real here. Hahaha

    Yeah, it's so tragic. 

  •  Thanks  ya youns  for ur comment  and the book title  u have mentioned  here  . I will search  for it online surely  :)

  • Thank u dear Evangeline :)

  •  AG  :)

  •     Thanks dear Icha  for ur admiration   , it means a lot for me :)

  • Rosemary :) 

  • Hi Rosemary,

    Wow, I was drowned in your story, it is beautiful describing though the sad ending. I can feel her love so deep and she suffered with the love itself. I couldn't imagine if I were in her shoes, and I don't want to be.

    Thank you for sharing the combine of poem an story, if I say so (I am weak in understanding a poem, but for this is an exception)

  •    Thanks Mishaikh  ur appreciation  means alot for me :)

  • Beautifully managed.  Touched my heart.  I find myself there in the fire or feeling the heat even living so far. But distance means nothing in emotional imagination.  They are universally spread.

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