ALONE BUT NOT LONELY......

Sitting alone in my cubicle..hearing the sound of the rain, and the music accompanies me as though understanding that I do not want to be disturbed.

Rain .....brings a magical atmosphere for me, sadness is so drowned.....

Have you ever felt the grief is so hard to leave you? the sorrow is hugging you so tight....even though you try to escape from it.... It's following your step...haunting you whenever you close your eyes..

I walk slowly towards the window...trying to find something that is able to repel my sadness. sitting on my couch, start to read La Tahzan (wrote by Aidh b A Alqarni).. the book that I haven't wanted to touch.......I hope to find a great sentence to wake me up from the nightmare...

I have lost you, but I don't want to lose my life too...your love is precious, but my life is more...........

I close the book, trying to find my own answer...I have lost but not yet dead

small faint smile on my lips, little burden lifted, I take a deep breath, reach my laptop and start writing....

hhhhaaaahhh!!!! I am alone but not lonely......

TADDDDAM MY FIRST BLOG....

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★RaTu★●•٠·˙ January 20, 2015 9:38

Thank you Mr. Bob for visiting my blog and reading my story, I keep trying to improve my English.
Mr. Bob January 20, 2015 8:25

You are not an elementary level English student. Your writing is too good for that.
★RaTu★●•٠·˙ January 11, 2015 23:43

Male...sis thanks, your like the story, yes we are think alike..
★RaTu★●•٠·˙ January 11, 2015 23:41

OMG...thank you lady Anne for reading my story,yes sometimes I can't handle myself to give my personal feeling when I write the story,that's the way I'm thinking when I lose someone in my real life..I put the idea there.
And your corrections, I really thankful for that...
Lady Anne January 11, 2015 11:16

I like your attitude. Instead of spending your life to wastage you value it more than anything else and have your sanity intact in spite of losing your love. You don't deny the pain but you embrace it with sensibleness. Truly, you earn my admiration.

Here are some of my corrections:

Sitting alone on in my cubicle

and the music company accompanies me as though understanding that I do not want to be disturbed.

the sorrow is hug hugging you so tight

its It's following your step...haunted haunting you whenever you close your eyes..

*****

Congratulations, Ratu! May you have more blogs to write ahead.
★RaTu★●•٠·˙ January 11, 2015 10:39

Thanks noa, yes ofcourse the best way is getting along with friends and family, I have one of them here........you,
noaslpls January 11, 2015 10:12

Welcome to the world of EC bloggers. Congrats on your first blog. Sometimes it's very hard to get rid the feeling of melancholy. But I guess you need to be surrounded by things or people that you love to get rid of those feelings.
★RaTu★●•٠·˙ January 10, 2015 12:35

Rangga, first, thanks for your comment to my blog..
and for your corrections, I will consider to give more attention to grammar...thank you very much Rangga. I'll fix it ngga
★RaTu★●•٠·˙ January 10, 2015 3:53

Masgareng thank you for reading and put your comment..
★RaTu★●•٠·˙ January 10, 2015 3:52

Maya...thank you,yes sometimes we feel empty in crowded place, I really appreciate your comment...

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