A WRITING...

I'm not a body with a soul...

And I'm not a soul with a body...

I am a soul with no body... and nobody...

But...

There is a point,

Being disappointed, it's a dead cinch...

And being hopeful, it seems so hard...

But doesn't matter anyway...

'Cause I'm the man of hard works...

So let's use the last bullet...

Put it in the weapon of a new attempt...

Sighting along the barrel of ideas...

To the lots of targets...

My last shot...

Hope...

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  • Elen... sorry for delay and thanks for the comment... I'm glad you liked it... your idea is important here... have fun...

  • setareh... sorry for delay and thanks for the comment... "Hope is the engine of life"... beautiful sentence... I admire the way you use words... I do it... I wish you one thing... happiness...

  • LUCInka... sorry for delay and thanks for the comment... sometimes I think maybe it's good to be a little depress... which seems wrong but... that's just a feeling... and some guys are sick of their feelings... hope you to feel good... everyday...

  • Wow, i agree with Luci, it is depressive but also it is impressive! I liked mostly the three first lines. Nice writing!

  • Very well written. Hope is the engine of life; without hope there is no dream and on attempts to make those dreams come true. I wish you the best shot.
  • It is pretty depressive.. I would say :/ even though i liked the way u wrote it...I hope u r ok and doing fine ...
  • Rica ederim benim arkadas. You are always welcome, Behrad.

  • Sophia... okay... please relax... deep breathing... I will wait for you patiently... hahaha ;)... and about aiming... it's hard with a weapon... but not with mind... have a great time...

  • dara gino... maybe it's better to keep our targets in our minds if we have targets... wish you success and thanks for the comment...

  • Nasilsin Behrad, Teskkur ederim arkadism! I was wondering about the targets. I am sure, you will succeed. 

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