Once upon a time there was a young man. During that time parents chose brides and grooms for their children. So, one day Zimi's parents chose a girl as his bride. But zimi was not happy with it as he wanted to choose someone himself.
Finally, the wedding day came. Zimi put his wedding clothing sulkily, ate almost nothing, did not laugh! His mother watched him and asked but Zimi did not share anything.
Later wedding took place and having been married they went to a place near a mountain. Having arrived without saying anything Zimi went to the mountain. There he sat under a fig tree and after a while fell into sleep.
But in the midst of his sleep he woke up having heard a sweet chirping. He opened his eyes and saw a yellow little bird beside him. He felt something and started thinking that the beautiful bird was asking him to go back to the valley.
And, when he got back he became dumbfounded to see her beautiful bride in the greenish flowery valley. When he heard her voice he became enchanted and found it so sweet. Literally she was dazzling in the late evening's slanting sun.
Then they walked together, laughed and sang together...being spellbound by the lovely spring!
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Hi there, Bet!
I think this is a real life story, some areas really do this kind of marriage, parents will choose. The other half is life a hidden thing inside a black box. You have no idea if they are pleasing or loathsome. So glad, you did it with happy ending.
Thanks for sharing this to us.
Dear bet,
So nice story. I’m thankful you to made a lovely ending. I like it very much. It's Short, but sweet effort. WELLDONE!
Hi Bet,
Your story is simple but beautiful. I liked it. From your blog I can learn English as well by correction from Danny. Thanks you have shared it with us.
why not having been married why having got married...now I know having got means after the marriage but then where do you use having been?
why not during, Danny?
very well writing, thanks bet.
Well, here are my corrections again
Once upon a time there was a young man. At that time (In those days) parents chose brides and grooms for their children. So, one day Zimi's parents chose a girl as his bride. But Zimi was not happy with it as he wanted to choose someone himself.
Finally, the wedding day came. Zimi sulkily put on his wedding clothing, ate almost nothing and was unsmiling! His mother watched him and asked but Zimi did not say anything.
Later, the wedding took place and having got married they went to a place near a mountain. Having arrived there Zimi went to the mountain without saying anything. There he sat under a fig tree and after a while fell asleep.
But in the midst of his sleep he woke up having heard a sweet chirping. He opened his eyes and saw a yellow small bird beside him. He felt something and started thinking that the beautiful bird was asking him to go back to the valley.
And, when he got back he was dumbfounded to see his beautiful bride in the green__ flowery valley. When he heard her voice he was enchanted and found it so sweet. Literally she was dazzling in the late evening_ slanting sunrays.
Then they walked together, laughed and sang together...being spellbound by the lovely spring!
Dear Bet, I have already corrected it but I don't see my comment here
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