I was sad as put out light.
Light but not bright.
Nobody got my gloom
I want flight from this hollow room
Who is zooming in and zooming out
All doubt about doubt and doubt
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I was sad as put out light.
Light but not bright.
Nobody got my gloom
I want flight from this hollow room
Who is zooming in and zooming out
All doubt about doubt and doubt
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Comments
Thanks TaNjiN for your kind attention.
Thanks saba and beethoven for the encouraging comments.
Beautiful poem.
Thank you :)
Thanks usra for your exclamation.
I thank all of my readers for appreciating my attempt. Anyway I am just a humble learner.
Thanks Ratu sis for appreciation.
Thanks a lot Stranger for encouragement.
Mohammad I am most grateful for your appreciation and encouragement.
Mishaikh, you dont stop to impress people, well done and thank you:)
Well done dear Mishaikh, rhyming is too hard especially when your vocabulary is excluded of some words. Seems you have the talent of poetry, so go on and don't give up, I'm waiting for your next one!
o my o my....how can u live without an "E"...
only the one who have such a talent could do that.
nice poem, thanks for sharing
You are welcome Peppo, Perfection comes step by step. Yours is a nice attempt.
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