Tell her I can’t live without her
Lots of love I have, but can’t tell her
I have burden of sadness,
But do not want to open to her
Can bear the hardship of life,
But your indifference for me is intolerable
Always keep my eyes damp
Doesn’t know how to drop out the tear
How the problem of my love be solved
I am unable to tell, you’re not ready to hear
It punishes me again and again
Want to live, where doesn’t know, how to live there
Comments
Hai mishaikh
I like your poetry, very beautiful
Thanks Dewi for such a sweet comment.
Having comments from a reader loke you O.M. pleases me a lot.
Nice poem! I like it.
ThanksVelyana. It pleases me.
“It isn't what we left behind
That breaks me
It's what we could've built
Had we stayed”
(― Rupi Kaur, The Sun and Her Flowers)
The words above, I found by chance.
I want to underline it by my words:
"The chances you never took, you will always bewail because you never will know how they would have ended."
"Your creator never will take anything from you without replacing it with something better."
Thanks Rose for very wisely commenting.
Hi Mishaikh
Nice poem! I like it.
Thanks saba. I am glad you like it.
Nice poem! However I remix few lines of this poem without changing its theme . Hopefully you like it
Here is
Convey her how much I love her
Of which I can't express either.
I am in the state of melancholy
Expressing it brings for you no worry
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