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Posted by Rose on June 6, 2020

I am a prisoner.


I'm a prisoner in my own prison,
because I myself am the prison.
I am the prisoner of my mind;
the prisoner of my heart;
lost in the infinity of my soul.
Who hears the questions
and gives the answers?
Who hears the melody of my heart
and changes the tune?
Who finds the key to break the chains?
Who knows the way and sets me free?

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  • sewar February 3, 2022 11:12

       Oh my God. The words are amazing how they captured my attention and moved my feelings.  As if they speak on behalf of myself. My dear friend, I believe humans get a lot of gifts. Eyes are one of them to read and feel such words. God bless you.

    • Rose > sewar February 3, 2022 16:34

      Thanks, sewar.

      Such words like yours are the best rewards. 

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    • Rose September 14, 2020 21:01

      Thanks, Fake. I hope you liked reading it.

       

  • Svitlana July 28, 2020 21:48

    Most of us feel the same. 

    Nice poem, dear Rose. 

    You are so wise in your thoughts. 

    I couldn't add anything more.

    • Rose > Svitlana September 14, 2020 21:01

      Thanks, dear Svitlana.

       

  • Rosemary :) July 28, 2020 16:49

       Deep words with deep pain 

    • Rose > Rosemary :) September 14, 2020 21:02

      Thanks, Rosemary. I always appreciate your comments.

       

  • saba June 10, 2020 18:32

     

    You are a very good writer. I like your poem.

    • Rose > saba September 14, 2020 21:02

      Thanks a lot, saba.

       

  • tawfeeq June 8, 2020 17:11

    Your poem reflects the dilemma of life nowadays. Most of educated people who have sensitive souls feel they are strangers in this world. It is a contradictory poin that modern life increases our isolation.It is also saddened to say that all people, who feel as if they prisoners of their minds, such people can write wonderful poems. We can enjoy to see their pains embodied in very painful verses. Are we sadistic readers? Actually, Yes.

    Christina Rossetti is an English poet wrote her masterpiece when she imprisoned herself for a long time. Unfortunately, Most lovers' of strong poems still enjoy reading her pains.
    I hear the questions because I feel the same. But they are unanswered questions.

    Who hears the melody of my heart? Only people who win the musical hearts can hear you clearly. If you would still wrote such nice poem there is no one wants to break the chains and gives you freedom. Because we enjoy poets torture.

    Many thanks, Rose. Your writings are Wonderful.

    ISOLATION.IT
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