A Wail

Those who saw me (the surrounding people) said that I didn't care (after our separation)
they said that to be with or without you, I will survive!
they said that I all my lifetime have never cried and said that your tears during our separation didn't bother me!
they said that it's impossible that I might be lost after leaving you!
And said that after leaving you, I do live all my days in spring!
they said that I and you have never been matching for each other!
And said that it would have been a must I to forget and sell you!
WHILE (the truth is that)............................I swear by Allah that after leaving you I taste the HELL
And that actually since that I find the tears are very sweet
And the longing to you never left me
which makes me look for you in me to find that the yearning to you is filling all of me
And that life after leaving you is just endless night in my eyes

All the night long, my tears and your memories don't want to leave me just like friends
suffering them, especially at nights
While I feel very much fearing about you, just want\need to get calmed about you but
I don't know why I'm fearing my eyes to meet yours!

Please pardon me if I have already blogged it. Actually this is a gift given to me one of my friends in the virtual world. No more in contact since long.

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  • Yes this is 'cry', Risty, but wail is a mournful cry, usually high-pitched or clear-sounding, as in grief or suffering.

    Thanks for your comment.

  • Hello there Mish! This is a new word for me, I looked for its meaning, are you referring about "cry"?
    "And that actually since that I find the tears are very sweet"
    I was stunned by this line, the feeling was so deep rooted that we can taste our tears differently.
    This is so you.

  • Yea, relations give love and they are the one who causes pain and complaints. Strangers have nothing to do with life.

  • Thanks bet for your emotionally impressive comment.

  • Thanks Onee, for your emoticonally tendering comment.

  • Thanks sewar for all your encouragement and appreciation. I am glad I have you as my reader.

  • owo.....I wish nobody will pass through this sort of devastating situation ever, amen! Should I say again that you have a very good hand to write prose and poetry?!

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  •        Oh my God, really your topic gave me a very wow time!!! Thanks. My friend, we cannot tell the precise moment when friendship is formed, but we can tell the precise moment when it is broken because, the shadow of that painful moment hunts us even in our dreams, I can tell. God bless you my friend.  

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