Free birdI'm a free birdHe said to meI won't be caughtAnd put in cageI want to be freeIf I am jailedmy heart and mindAre lost with meI have my dreamSo nice to feelI'll make it realI'd like to stayKept in your armsTo share your loveAnd taste its goodsYour lovely moodTo be kissed and holdBut I love to flyTo reach the skyAnd kiss the starsWarmed by the sunlying on the cloudsA sweet LullabyI go where my woundsAre no more foundNo rules no lawsTo guide my thoughtsLet me be far a partFrom broken heartsTo a peaceful worldNo wantings no needsI've thrown my fearsNo more sheded tearsFighting and warsAre left behindI will say goodbyeTo the tears and criesMy pains will dieI keep on my smileMy laughter my joyStolen all beforePlease understandYou're killing me insideAccept to be awayFrom me my dearIt's time to leaveBe courageous and braveI have my pathI must follow upYou're far apartA hurting fateFor me and youBut it's time to goI am a free birdFree bird is me.
Dear Nebia!
Fantastic job,congratulations,I really like your poem,you can express your mind freely too!:)
I found a quote from Paolo Coelho's:“By the river Piedra I sat down and wept”
'I could have. What does this phrase mean? At any given moment in our lives, there are certain things that could have happened but didn’t. The magic moments go unrecognized, and then suddenly, the hand of destiny changes everything. But love is much like a dam: if you allow a tiny crack to form through which only a trickle of water can pass, that trickle will quickly bring down the whole structure, and soon no one will be able to control the force of the current.'
Love is a trap. When it appears, we see only its light, not its shadows.
You have chosen a wonderful picture for illustration too,those american eagles are fascinting creatures,perfect choice....
Great work...great poetry ...well-done my friend...wonderful in form of words/lyrics....very philosophical, unique idea, fifty five lines, 10 stanza are used to portray the whole idea... i think may be its a little bit more.... but by and large very good attempt...some great poets of the world i.e., Goety, Iquabl etc., also adopted the same idea and amazingly expressed with reference to the dignity and greatness of a great man/ nation...
Good work my teacher...
wow! BRAVO!!!
I love it....sounds so nice and i am very agree with you ," I'M A FREE BIRD "
but you know what , when you final find your freedom is when you found a great person next to you, becouse reach a freedom is " TO BE KISSED AND HOLD" and still doing and reaching everything do you want, " YOU'LL MAKE IT REAL " coz,,,,,,, " A FREE BIRD YOU ARE" :)
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Fantastic job,congratulations,I really like your poem,you can express your mind freely too!:)
I found a quote from Paolo Coelho's:“By the river Piedra I sat down and wept”
'I could have. What does this phrase mean? At any given moment in our lives, there are certain things that could have happened but didn’t. The magic moments go unrecognized, and then suddenly, the hand of destiny changes everything.
But love is much like a dam: if you allow a tiny crack to form through which only a trickle of water can pass, that trickle will quickly bring down the whole structure, and soon no one will be able to control the force of the current.'
Love is a trap. When it appears, we see only its light, not its shadows.
You have chosen a wonderful picture for illustration too,those american eagles are fascinting creatures,perfect choice....
Good work my teacher...
What a beautiful poem, so full of meaning... I guess each one of us would love to be a "free bird". Thanks dear friend .
Nadira.
thanks for sharing!
-Nadiyah-
I love it....sounds so nice and i am very agree with you ," I'M A FREE BIRD "
but you know what , when you final find your freedom is when you found a great person next to you, becouse reach a freedom is " TO BE KISSED AND HOLD" and still doing and reaching everything do you want, " YOU'LL MAKE IT REAL " coz,,,,,,, " A FREE BIRD YOU ARE" :)
Thank you, nebia.