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Posted by Nebia on November 19, 2010

Reason of my birth or killing deathYou came out of a breath to fulfill my dreamWill you be a faith for future lifeOr just a name that I could screamAll my beliefs are out of reachYou changed my life to a playing sceneStill longing hopes that you will teachFor all that things I dare not seePatient in all what it will beYou are the one who made it realSo nice and good better maybeBut what it should I yet have to feelContinue hope or lose my faithIn what you do or what you sayBut you should know I am the sameI will not go or nor I will changeI keep you inside me.
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  • Nebia November 27, 2010 14:13
    Thank you dear Tara for passing by and reading my poem I am honoured.
  • Tara Benwell November 26, 2010 14:31
    This is a very deep poem Nebia. I love it. This is my favourite line: "You changed my life to a playing scene". Keep writing!
  • Nebia November 23, 2010 14:49
    Hey Princess Leea, I like your windy comment lol. Thaaaaaaaaaaank you.
  • Nebia November 23, 2010 14:46
    Hi dear sister Atika, the best place for love is inside dearest. It is when it goes outside that it may be missed or lost forever , no????
    Thank you for your sensitive comment.
  • Nebia November 23, 2010 14:43
    Yes yes yes vindos. But we need the strength... I loved your comment , thank you.
  • Nebia November 23, 2010 14:41
    Hi Pankaj. I missed you so much. Thank you.
  • Nebia November 23, 2010 14:39
    Thank you Ima jay, it's very kind of you.
  • Nebia November 23, 2010 14:38
    Hi,dear sister Nadira. Each time I post a poem I think of you , Karenina and Fa.
    I keep hoping they will be back to ec soon...
  • Nebia November 23, 2010 14:35
    Hi Achan nice philosophy but don't you know the arabic proverb that says The wind goes in the way that doesn't fit the ships???? Thank you for your kindness brother.
    I wish your ship will follow the wind lol
  • Nebia November 23, 2010 14:30
    My douce Deuce(It is French , lol), I will not loose my mind but my heart is already lost.
    Thank you for being always present in my peoms dear. Hugs.
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