As time going, I grow up. And I even don't have enough time to think about that. I just grow up. Go to work at 7:00am, get back home at 17:00pm everyday. When I am on the bus every morning, listenning to the vedio, watching the moving people, I always think what we are searching for, what we are pursuing. It seems that everybody is busing. They are all walking fast. Some looks twinkling, some looks tired.From one of my feet steps into the oiffice, a new work day is beginning.Sit before the computer, reply some e-mails ,suf the Internet and sometimes read books in case of falling behind.This is not the life I want.But I just sit here and do nothing.I don't what to do and how to do. Think about these things leaves me nothing but waste some of my brain cells.One of my classmates works in an Insure company.She is much harder than me. She has to work overtime everyday and even on the weekends. So she doesn't wont to stay there any longer.But she can't leave now.Because leaving means she has to find a new job. A new suitable job is not easy to find under this condition. She has to endure that.She always call me to relieve her feelings.What is wrong with us? What is wrong with our life? We work hard everyday never stop learning new things in case of falling behind. However, we don't feel that happy.Why? I dont know, maybe one head is not enough to think about these questions.hehe..
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This text is written on two subjects, one on ..a girl who wants to find out the realities and reasons of herself, her dull bore routine life and her surrounding activities... and second one is a girl who is looking for a better job. I have read somewhere that only one thesis statement, development the said thesis statements through some paragraphs, each logically developed with one topic sentence and last simple conclusion are the essential of one good text(essay).
I like to comment on your first thesis of text. After reading i find out that you are very sensitive and realistic, its great, but you are indeed on the way where at the end either you get satisfaction or you lost your inner-self. Unfortunately, when i got this dilemma i lost my inner-self. ... social subjects, activities are much complex, diversities and deep to understand, although, looking much simple one. I may suggest that the said girl must adopt positive, optimistic and living approaches. She has to enjoy ever simple thing in a very simple way. Have more numbers of friend and hobbies. When she travels in a but she lives among the society and enjoy every color and attitude of surroundings even simple bus too.
Thank you and take care.
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This text is written on two subjects, one on ..a girl who wants to find out the realities and reasons of herself, her dull bore routine life and her surrounding activities... and second one is a girl who is looking for a better job. I have read somewhere that only one thesis statement, development the said thesis statements through some paragraphs, each logically developed with one topic sentence and last simple conclusion are the essential of one good text(essay).
I like to comment on your first thesis of text. After reading i find out that you are very sensitive and realistic, its great, but you are indeed on the way where at the end either you get satisfaction or you lost your inner-self. Unfortunately, when i got this dilemma i lost my inner-self. ... social subjects, activities are much complex, diversities and deep to understand, although, looking much simple one. I may suggest that the said girl must adopt positive, optimistic and living approaches. She has to enjoy ever simple thing in a very simple way. Have more numbers of friend and hobbies. When she travels in a but she lives among the society and enjoy every color and attitude of surroundings even simple bus too.
Thank you and take care.